My application...

[ex_crucioed]

1.Name: Steph
2. Age: 21
3. A) Have you read all of the Harry Potter books that are out currently? - Yes.
B) How many are there (excluding the two books done for charity)? - 7.
C)Which one was your favourite? Explain. 
Harry Potter & The chamber of secrets for so many reasons but mainly beacause I thought it was the most mysterious of the lot. I love

Comments

[chaotic_vanity]

For 3C, watch your commas and capital letters. For #4, I think it's "octopi" maybe?

For #10, I think you should explain why those words are important to you, not explain that you have those qualities. From that question, I want to hear what's important to you. The rest of the application tells me what qualities you have.

For 21, do you mean push?

It looks good, and I can tell a lot about you and your personality =) I think what you need to do now is go through and fix all the run-on sentences and just edit, basically. I can help you find errors or anything if you want! :)

I'm glad you're applying, Steph!

[ex_crucioed]

Oki :D And thanks so much! OMG I totally didn't see the c instead of s on 21 *facepalm*, I am always rushing things and that is not good!
Thanks hun *hugs*

I can't wait to see where I'll be put, I hope I'm not squibbed :[

By the way I finally found a header for my LJ shall I give you the link?

[chaotic_vanity]

Yes, but I also need to see the layout too =)

[ex_crucioed]

Ok hun and thanks so much for all the help *hugs*

Here is the link to the layout - http://www.livejournal.com/customize/options.bml?group=customcss

And here is the link to the header -
http://i206.photobucket.com/albums/bb173/i_love_the_1980s/1tbag-crop.jpg

I'm not sure what size heaers have to be though?:s