((OOC)) Fic - Time Slips By

[repeatnshuffle]

This is an overview ficlet of Seiran's time back home between DR visits, put in sentence challenge format. It's roughly in chronological order, and shouldn't be too rough to follow. (Do post if anything's completely confusing, though.) And no, I'm not sure I am using semicolons right. I used the Alpha challenge set from onesentence, but I haven't

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ooc

[devilin_details]

Every time Seiran thinks about one of my Marlicks I "awwww" so hard. -_-;;;

I really love this format for showing the passing of time - just the important moments, or the ones with DR resonance, but you still get a feeling of what happened overall. A really lovely way to see what happened to her in her time away!

God, Linner. Don't screw this up. sinking feeling

Re: ooc

[repeatnshuffle]

D'aw, well the fellows did get a fair deal of reflection time. =3 The funny thing is I need to officially decide how much she spoke of them, since that would effect Piston recognizing them or not-

But thanks very much - those sentence challenges are pretty fun to write, too! And I just did a skim of your new one. x3 TAS?! Pffff---- How you managed to keep that humor in writing a story-

Merp, well these are treacherous waters, but here's to trying to navigate them. Noooo, this ship has sprung a leak! Get a life jack- Oh hey, double meaning.