Revelations- Chapter Twenty-Seven

Feb 26, 2012 01:43


A/N: If I put a long excuse up here for the massive delay would anyone care? :P Let's just say I fucking hate earthquakes and aftershocks and people who give you less than a month to move out of your house for quake repairs.

Anyway, I wrote a few little LJ-only Revelations oneshots while this was slowly being written, Inevitable and Not Always Good, ( Read more... )

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kitkaos February 25 2012, 13:00:57 UTC
Eeep eep eeep! New Revelations chapter!!!
*bounces around the room*

Sorry, just had to get that off my chest -- off to read it now!

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kitkaos February 25 2012, 14:25:28 UTC
Phew. Wow!

I did have to read back a bit, but it was more than worth it.

Love all the family interactions - especially this last part with the kids and their friends there felt so natural and great. I love that you chose this way of letting us experience the press conference with them! :D

And the president! Of course he'd want to be involved and I'm glad he seems such a reasonable man (loved the detail with the coffee and the bit of background that there have already been laws keeping Superman in check and his activities legal for decades).

What is Smith up to? Curiouser and curiouser!

Looking forward to the next chapter - whenever that may be out, don't sweat it, I'll be here and still reading. Hope things will return to some semblance of normal for you soon. *hugs*

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barb1808 February 25 2012, 19:17:29 UTC
*takes a deep breath*

So the press conference is on its way...

I love that all the kids and some of their friends are huddled together to watch it. It reminds me a little of how we huddle together when something important happenes.

So Clark went to the President... Well I like how understanding he is and that he shows up at the press conference as well.

Now I'm really curious how that conference goes on. Do I wish any special questions covered? Hmm. Right now I can'T think of any. I trust you and your writing skills to find the right mix.

And with Smith and Miss Greene you have a set up something new to worry about. Poor Clark, poor Kents. I wonder what happened to Smith he blames them for...

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babettew54 March 7 2012, 00:05:44 UTC
Yes, yes!! You updated your story. I'm so happy for you and your readers!

Well, I'm finally over my 'hump' in my story and I'm gliding into the end and found some time to read this. I loved it, especially Clark and his boldness, but his family's future is at stake. I'm with him... do what needs to be done ... go to the head guy, since he won't be coming to you.

Loved the kids' interaction, as always. You have them down pact.. Perfect.. Jason was funny! *heee*

Humm, a question for Clark? I'll think on it... *ponders*

Again, update when you can... !! :D

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saavikam77 April 13 2012, 01:35:19 UTC
Oh dear, I get the feeling that this is gonna be one hell of a press conference! O_O I so loved the late-night visit to the President, of course. :p

And poor Jason, stuck with all those people in his apartment at one time. XD

*applauds*

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