[TM] 294 - Passing

Aug 02, 2009 15:48

Letting her hand run across her forehead, her fingers tangled into her bangs a bit. Exhaling she made a few more notations on the sheet of paper, trying to see if she could make some sort of connection. Setting the pen down she shut her eyes, exhaling out a long slow breath that she knew should've relaxed her more than it was. Glancing up to the ( Read more... )

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not_a_savage August 4 2009, 21:28:34 UTC
OOC: Oh my goodness I liked this for so many reasons! 1) I could literally hear Jules' voice in my head while I read this, you have her dialogue down so perfectly! 2) Her life seems like a lot of moments that she seems to let pass and I like how you expanded on that. 3) We've talked before about scenes that could feasibly be in someone's canon before as a kind of fill-in-the-blank, and I love how you take that idea and insert it into what we know. Great job!

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repo_woman August 4 2009, 21:34:27 UTC
[ooc: Thank you!! I think I like this one a lot, because it could be from the reset! I was trying to just give a day out of her life, and then as it went on I realized that something was missing. I actually think that this is like around the days when Richard visited her to recruit her to the island. It's just an odd feeling I had while writing it. I'm so glad you enjoyed it!]

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someyoungpup August 7 2009, 19:18:26 UTC

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