[TM] 340 - For Sale.

[repo_woman]

"David, honestly, I don't think it's safe." Juliet intoned her concern, but she knew that if she didn't get it for him, that he'd just ask Jack. It wouldn't even be an argument she'd want to have, but she knew the first time he'd come home with a split lip, or worse, she'd be on the phone to him, asking why he had allowed him to have it.

"Mom. I'

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[dontgetweird]

First comment with this journal goes to YOU!

Ok, I was seriously waiting all day to read this post! All day! And it didn't disappoint. You know I love the sideways verse to bits, and the chance to see the Shephards operate (no pun intended) as a family is such a treat. Thank you so much for giving me the biggest grin in the world right now!

[repo_woman]

Yay!! First comment! I rule!

I'm so glad you liked it. There are a few lines in there that I was, like, do I keep it, do I take it out?? I'm glad I left it all as-is though. I love them too and I think that we need to work on them getting married again. LOL who cares if they're dead!

[dontgetweird]

It's perfect! I'm a sucker for dialogue and this feels very natural. There's love there but also that same day to day frustration that all families have. It's a balancing act, and one that's pulled off flawlessly here.

We have sideways wiggle room. Jack and Jules and David being a familia is CANON!