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FIC: Rewind Forward (D1) 43/63

Dec 21, 2008 22:45

Title: Rewind Forward (43/63)
Author: Ociwen
Rating: NC17 (eventual)
Disclaimer: Konomi owns all.
Summary: Niou, meet Yagyuu.
Author's Notes: Spoilers for everything.

( 'Playtime is over…' )

d1, rewind forward, tenipuri

Comments 8

hibimaosuki December 22 2008, 06:12:30 UTC

NEED.

TO COMMENT.

NOW.

Even if it's incoherent.

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♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

I have only one word for this.

PERFECT.

reposoir December 26 2008, 15:23:07 UTC

:D?

dshae47 December 23 2008, 06:01:21 UTC

I LOVED this match! <3

reposoir December 26 2008, 15:23:33 UTC

Thank you!

It was extremely difficult to write, so I am glad that you enjoyed it :)

vocalharmonies January 4 2009, 10:09:02 UTC

WOW! The way you wrote this... Even though I already knew the outcome and how it was going to happen, I still held my breath waiting for Niou or Yaguu's next move. Beautiful. Seriously.

I am most definitely awed by your writing prowess.

reposoir January 5 2009, 01:08:23 UTC

Thank you so much--it means a lot that you enjoyed this match, because it was a hard scene to write and makes it that much more rewarding :)

setra January 22 2009, 03:34:56 UTC

I'm starting here to re-read and catch up to the end (I still haven't, I FAIL).... and... this part still just blows me away. It's one of the single most powerful narratives of a match that I've ever read in a PoT fic. It helps that it's /this/ match too, and that you did such an amazing job with the switch and the D1 side of things. ^___^
You know I love this story, but I really can't say it enough.

reposoir January 25 2009, 22:40:20 UTC

Thank you! I do hope you enjoy the re-read! (The Switch. So hard to write. So much thinking and cross-referencing the manga...*falls over* I'm glad you enjoyed that part as well!)