FIC: Yokai Monogatari (Yagyuu/Niou) NC17 2/2

Jan 11, 2009 16:01

Title: Yokai Monogatari (Monster Tales, Part 2)
Author: Ociwen
Rating: NC17
Wordcount: 16 000
Disclaimer: Alas, Konomi and Kodansha own Prince of Tennis and collect all the benefits from it.
Summary: Yagyuu is perfectly content minding his own business, until a tanuki shows up one day. And weird things happen.
Warnings: This involves Niou. That ( Read more... )

d1, tenipuri

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reposoir January 17 2009, 23:43:03 UTC
:D

Thank you so much!

Tanuki magic can explain everything. Except Marui's attraction to Niou's older sister ;)

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justsonya January 11 2009, 23:58:21 UTC
Absolutely fabulous. :)

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reposoir January 17 2009, 23:43:12 UTC
Thank you!

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venivincere January 12 2009, 00:00:10 UTC
Doingfirst is luuuuuuuuucky! This is a wonderful story, and even though the whole musky dog-thing kinda was icky, the love story is very, very sweet. *loves*

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venivincere January 13 2009, 02:39:28 UTC
So I'm thinking along, as you do of a morning before you get out of bed, about this story (because I can't remember any time when I've read a story of yours that it hasn't stuck in my mind for days afterward, causing me to ruminate on it again and again) and I got stuck on the very subtle absurdity of the piece. Honestly, the realism did make me take this story at face value at first, especially after following your Dénoument series, which put forth the supposition that these boys just turned into girls one day and then treated the story with a very honest realism, subsequently. So I took it seriously at first, and it was only toward the end did I get poked with the absurdist equivalent of a sharp stick that I recognized it for what it was. Which, of course, was when Yukimura took very, very seriously the threat to his bulbs. And then I knew I had been played like an instrument in your oh-so-skillful hands, and I was once again slayed by your genius. This is a delicately and brilliantly done piece. I wish I had a fingernail's ( ... )

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reposoir January 17 2009, 23:45:07 UTC
Eheh. Firstly, dogs aren't my thing, either. By a long shot. So that was all pretend and assumptions on the author's part, about dogs and smells and TRYING NOT TO BE BIASED! ;)

Yukimura's bulbs are serious, Veni. Mess with them, and you're messing with him. (I seriously do not try any clever shit when I write, I just write and lol to myself and the ridiculousness that comes out, and if it works, fantastic!)

Thank you so much! :D

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grimmjow_jagger January 12 2009, 00:01:38 UTC
This was so much fun to read! :D

And warm, furry Niou sounds especially good in this cold weather...

Is there anything that can faze Yukimura?

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reposoir January 17 2009, 23:46:24 UTC
Thank you so much!

The only things that can faze Yukimura are:

1. whoever distracts him when he is trying to paint that Impressionist picture of a tennis court

2. threats to his garden bulbs

;D

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kaerstyne January 12 2009, 00:36:43 UTC
That was just freakin' adorable ♥ Very nice.

...and Niou having tanuki magic that comes from his balls is disturbingly fitting.

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reposoir January 17 2009, 23:47:35 UTC
Thank you so much!

Tanukis have large, magical balls. So does Niou ;)

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