FIC: Sweet Sixteen, SanaYuki, PGish

May 21, 2010 14:14

Title: Sweet Sixteen
Author: Ociwen
Rating: PGish?
Wordcount: 2700
Summary: Sanada's turning sweet sixteen-and never been kissed.
Disclaimer: No money is being made and no copyright or trademark infringement of Tenimyu, Konomi is intended.
Warnings: NONE! :O
Author's notes: Written for Sanada's birthday, 2010. Happy Birthday, Sanada Genichirou! & ( Read more... )

sanayuki, tenipuri

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wednesdayschild May 21 2010, 18:32:06 UTC
So lovely!

My favourite part had to be:

In the middle of a painting, a man painted in blurry stripes of yellow, a wide red mouth, and white shorts. In one hand, a racket, in the other, a red blob. Beneath him, another man, with dark hair, his mouth wide open in a scream and another red, gaping blob in the center of his chest. Everything is covered in glitter.

"Er…" Sanada says.

"Andy Roddick will like it, don't you think? My Ganbare painting?" Yukimura rolls the painting back up. "I feel the same way he does. You know, after he lost Wimbledon last year to Roger Federer."

I laughed out loud and reread it about five times before moving on.

<3

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reposoir May 21 2010, 20:36:36 UTC
Andy Roddick eats Roger Federer's heart. Only a sick person could enjoy that! ;D

&hearts Thank you so much! (Still have plans for that fic for you! You should give me a pairing to play with. Or, character. Or, Starbucks drink...)

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mayezinha May 21 2010, 19:19:41 UTC
Yes!!
::bops fist::
I missed Sanada´s brother. And Sakuke is totally stealing the spotlight, you know?XDD

Jackal steals her back for News' latest single Oh, Jackal. XDD

I like this fanboying Yukimura even when it's manly... and scary in his art aesthetics.

Happy Birthday, Sanada-kun, because you managed to be kissed in your 16th Birthday!

And thanks for sharing this one, Allison!

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reposoir May 21 2010, 20:39:17 UTC
Sanada's brother is, like, the hottest thing on the planet. With personality, too! ;)

Jackal prefers News to Kattun. Marui prefers Miley over everyone, although he is warming to Gaga after he watched the Telephone video on niconico with Jackal ;)

Yukimura LOVES Andy Roddick--you know, I know, everyone should. Hopefully his painting reaches Andy before Wimbledon!

Thank you so much, Maye! I enjoyed writing this fic and LOOK! I was NICE to Sanada, for once! No meanness virtually whatsoever! (Mostly)

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mayezinha May 21 2010, 20:52:06 UTC
Of course if not there weren't any Sasuke is the first place. ;D
Well, yes, NEWS is nicer (and I can't believe I just said that).
Though I hope this Sakura single won't jinx Jackal's date XDD.

Now I'm thinking about Marui making Jackal sing tlephone in karaoke.
I'm pretty sure Roddick might even tweet about this crazy drawing he got FROM JAPAN!!

Yes, it was good to see that Sanada would win in the end (because the way his brother handles him is the same as always)

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reposoir May 21 2010, 21:18:44 UTC
LOL this Telephone karaoke needs to make its way into fic now! >:D

Andy Roddick would definitely tweet. And possibly mention it on facebook, too, though he rarely updates facebook. Rafael Nadal on the other hand...;)

Surely every family teases each other! It would be a boring family otherwise!

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doovlynsidhe May 21 2010, 19:27:33 UTC
♥♥♥FAVORITE LINE♥♥♥
"I feel the same way he does. You know, after he lost Wimbledon last year to Roger Federer."

I've missed reading your fics!! :D So many great little moments in this - you always did write the best team interaction.

"My girlfriend can't come," Renji says.

Sanada blinks. Soap slithers down his face. His eye stings. "Renji?"

Renji cranks his shower onto full blast. "-at junior high still," he says.

That's when I started to laugh out loud in my office. XD

"Let's try this again," Yukimura says ( ... )

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reposoir May 22 2010, 12:23:48 UTC
>:D Yukimura's never going to admit that he wants to eat Echizen's heart, but losing at the Nationals would be on par with Andy at Wimbledon. Sorta. ;)

I've missed writing, so I am thrilled that you enjoyed this, J! Team interaction always just seems to...sneak its way into things...

&hearts

(And see? I was nice to Sanada for once! Practically NOTHING mean for once! He caught the biggest break ever!)

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monarchist May 21 2010, 20:22:15 UTC
Awww, this was lovely to read. Sanada's brother = win. And Sasuke...

Little clammy hands grab onto Sanada's. "Will you be back in time to play tag with me before bed?" Sasuke tugs on Sanada's arm.

Made me all googly-eyed. ♥

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reposoir May 22 2010, 12:25:01 UTC
Thank you so much! Sanada's brother is pretty much the awesomest character around that has not popped into the series yet! ;)

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tsundelenxkaho May 22 2010, 05:10:04 UTC
Sanada and Yukimura~ Love love~

I love every part of it~~~ Love this fic *hearts*

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reposoir May 22 2010, 12:25:32 UTC
Thank you so much! :)

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