FIC: Maybe Definitely, YanaKiri, NC17, 4/7

Oct 17, 2010 15:52

Title: Maybe Definitely (4/7)
Author: Ociwen
Wordcount: Long
Rating: NC17 overall
Disclaimer: Everything you can possibly think of, and then some. Spoilers for 40.5 and the entire series, including ShinTenipuri.
Warning: Girl parts, and then some. Crude humour. Misogyny. The usual.
Summary: Renji wakes up as a girl.
Author's Notes: This is a one- ( Read more... )

yanakiri, denouverse, tenipuri

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wednesdayschild October 17 2010, 21:00:37 UTC
This is definitely my favourite pairing in the Denouement universe -- I'm really, really emotionally invested in it, to a greater extent than any of the others (which is strange, because I'd usually rank YanaKiri below D1 and SanaYuki). I love their turmoil, I love how hard Kirihara tries: he's the perfect counterpoint to Yanagi's inertia.

Other things I love:

Niou
Jackal finding out (as always, haha)
Every inclusion of Inui
Kirihara rolls his eyes. "I'm not stupid, senpai. I know all about the tadpoles that live in your jizz and stick to a girl's insides."
Jackal's Justin Bieber love
Everything about Kirihara and Yanagi and their relationship.

I can't wait for the next part! <3

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reposoir October 17 2010, 21:21:14 UTC
Awww, I'm glad that you're so invested in the YanaKiri of this verse! Although SanaYuki is the easiest of this verse to write, I really, really like writing the YanaKiri because it's the most...happy, overall? One day soon I'll write the MaruiJackal, but that's later ;)

Jackal knows everything! Often against his will, poor boo!

Eheh--the tadpoles came from some show or website or whatever I was surfing that talked about how braindead some boys are about sex ed. And it, of course, had to be included. As did Justin Bieber.

Thank you so much! &hearts

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mayezinha October 18 2010, 04:48:44 UTC
Damn, Allison, I cried. I always cry in this part.
So many references. [JUJU, really??] ::flails::

Probably not only Jackal know, at this time probably Niou is suspicious.

And well, you can't say that Akaya don't know a thing. ::cringes::

Loved it. I can't believe how you make me like Akaya in this verse.

Thanks for sharing! :D

::stays tuned:::

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reposoir October 18 2010, 19:18:26 UTC
Don't cry Maye, it's only a fic! ;)

You got the Juju!! I have to admit, I liked her one cover. Just need to find a DL of her album, though. Woe.

Kirihara tries. He does.

Niou might seem suspicious, but really, he's too self-involved to really care that much about Renji.

Thank you, as ever!

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doingfirst October 19 2010, 02:33:06 UTC
Lulz, I didn't know you were updating this periodically! *wins*

Your pop culture references are what sets you apart from all other fic writers in this fandom, imo. You're way more thorough with details, descriptions and nuances that really make it feel ~Japanese. Plus, all the squishy feelings and stuff make me heart the fic like super

:DDDDD

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reposoir October 19 2010, 11:54:02 UTC
If you note the posting dates, it's definitely updated regularly, though the more comments I receive compared to statcounter results, the more likely I am to update sooner...

Yay for pop culture references? There are some really, really excellent ones coming up that you will enjoy muchly. >:D

(Thank you!)

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see_you_someday October 20 2010, 14:55:24 UTC
Kirihara killed me in this. He's being all ROMANTIC ALJSODUEWEJR~!!!! <33 I love it. So sweet and beautiful. I can only hope he's that deliciously great when I go after him in the PoT dating sim. Dx

Wonderful chapter. I feel so bad for Renji. D;

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reposoir October 24 2010, 19:07:24 UTC
Thank you so much! Kirihara is the two extremes--both crazy violent in his game, and yet romantic with a soft spot. And Renji appreciates both. ;)

Hope you enjoy the next section, too!

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sporkyforky October 22 2010, 05:33:11 UTC
Personally, I think that YanaKiri have the best relationship out of all the couples in this verse. Kirihara's just too naive but wants the best for Yanagi. The button necklace was so sweet :]

BEIBER. DBSK. RADWIMPS. HOORAY.

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reposoir October 24 2010, 19:10:06 UTC
They do certainly have, perhaps, the most 'stable' relationship of the verse, I agree!

Just wait for Jackal/Marui's story, where far more Bieber and pop culture references will emerge! ;)

(Thank you!)

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