FIC: Cake or Death? D1, Rish

[reposte]

Title: Cake or Death?
Author: Ociwen
Wordcount: 3300
Rating: Rish
Disclaimer: Konomi owns all,
Warning: Saccharine situations.
Summary: It's Yagyuu's birthday.
Author's Notes: Written for Yagyuu's birthday, 2010. Happy Birthday, Yagyuu! Readers, interpret as you will…

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Comments

:D :D :D :D :D

[wednesdayschild]

OK, so we're baby-sitting, and David keeps on asking, 'Lucy, why are you grinning so madly?' ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ Apparently my joy is not subtle!

My sister-in-law has just come home to relieve us, so I'll post a longer comment later/tomorrow. Suffice to say, I adored it! ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

Re: :D :D :D :D :D

[reposoir]

Eheh--little does David know...

I tried to get this up in time so that the Europeans (or, well, Brits anyway) would have an early read at this!)

[ketchupblood]

Oh wow, I love your Yagyuu so much. I love that he's still totally 'the gentleman' but he doesn't come from a 'gentleman' family. I love how his birthday kind of sucks until he gets to Niou's house and realizes that Niou didn't forget. It's kind of a perfect birthday fic for him. ♥ Thank you for sharing!

[reposoir]

Yagyuu tries to make up for his less than stellar family life, and he would be more than happy to appropriate Niou's!

Thank you! ^^

[mayezinha]

You can't say that Niou doesn't care. He's quite sweet, actually. even in his jealousy. XD

I love this line:

Yagyuu inhales the smells of food cooking and air freshener gone a little stale, mothballs and books and home. Maybe because I forgot how much of a warm place Yagyuuu's house is. >>;;

And wow, Niou has boundaries about regurgitated food. XDDD

A nice birthday gift, thanks for sharing!

[reposoir]

Except if anyone knew Niou cared, he'd never, ever live it down. Thus, he makes another facade to hide behind...;)

You can never forget Yagyuu's happy family--well, it's not terrible, just, you know. Not like Niou's.

Niou definitely has his limits. Maybe Marui would be happy to swap cud with someone, but Niou? Nope. Nastay.

Thank you, Maye!

[lucathia_rykatu]

Awww. Loved how everyone wished him happy birthday throughout the day. Niou was really cute with how he tried to hide what he was doing. Kirihara was really cute too with that gift (but too bad for him, Yagyuu already has multiple copies. Oh man, that made me smile).

[reposoir]

Kirihara tries! Except in the end, he fails. And Yagyuu is too nice of a senpai to say otherwise.

(Am glad that made you smile! Thank you!)

[everlind]

Oh this was all sorts of awesome.

I knew he was up to something. I love how every team member got to be in the spotlight for a moment. And it was perfect how Yagyuu's birthday kind of sucked, but turned out all kinds of 'good' in the end.

And Niou. Bless him. Cake and strawberries. Even asking Marui to help him.

There were many nice moments in this, killer lines and details and spot-on interaction.

I loved this, thanks so much for sharing!

[reposoir]

Eheh, Niou is always up to something! Or else he wouldn't be Niou ;)

(You know, I nearly forgot Yukimura, and then had a moment of realization, because even Yukimura isn't so heartless to not with Yagyuu a Happy Birthday!)

Thank you so much! :D