FIC: Maybe Definitely, YanaKiri, NC17, 6/7

[reposte]

Title: Maybe Definitely (6/7)
Author: Ociwen
Wordcount: Long
Rating: NC17 overall
Disclaimer: Everything you can possibly think of, and then some. Spoilers for 40.5 and the entire series, including ShinTenipuri.
Warning: Girl parts, and then some. Crude humour. Misogyny. The usual.
Summary: Renji wakes up as a girl.
Author's Notes: This is a one-

Comments

[mayezinha]

Aside seeing how Jackal is falling for Marui (you can't say he's persuasive)

I loved the tiny moments between Renji and Akaya, you can't say he's serious about this. ::gives standing ovation for Akaya's sister and her lovely driving ;)::

As the Kamen Rider reference (and the Gundam T-shirt)

And many other little things (like the D1 drama insert).

I thought this part was the last, so it makes me happy that there's still more to read!

Thanks for sharing! ^^

[reposoir]

Thanks, Maye! Of course, the Kamen Rider and Gundam references are requisite for anything related to Akaya. As is his bitch of a sister (though really, can you blame her for thinking he's an idiot? ;)

[ezri_sun]

Poor Renji, most in denial about the gender switch now about to give birth alone. Worst first pregnancy second to Niou giving birth in his bathroom...

I love the snippets with Inui and the two of them discussing how pregnancy effects his tennis. I kinda wish we got some of the other teams opinions on this more, although there are come cameos. This one makes me happy. Especailly to be followed up with Yukimura saying Renji should be back in fine tennis form in 2 weeks. None of them know what they are in for do they?

And bonus for me and references to the other stories! Especially Yagyuu's rape of Niou (case that is what it was). I don't know, I somewhat like the thought that someone else knew something wasn't quite right...

Can't wait for the next part!

[reposoir]

Thank you so much! Your comment was one I mulled over for a while, because you bring up some excellent points that I really truly appreciate caught your eye in the fic, especially the 'you can be back to tennis in 2 weeks'!

I hope that the last section doesn't disappoint! *nervous*

[ezri_sun]

I will be honest and I do read each part over a few times before I comment, which is probably why I manage to pick up a lot....and I have a tendency to re-read all of these fics when procrastinating in my essays......

And given how I know everything generally turns out, I doubt I'll be disappointed...you'll know either way :)

[anonymous]

another very great chapter!

I LOVE Kirihara's reaction to it all, I think I say before to you that you write boys very well and this is the best example "you're number one" love it!!

jackal would make a hot girl

Thanks as alwas for sharing!! --tanja

[reposoir]

Thank YOU so very much for the kind, encouraging comments!

[beanrice]

Yayyyy new chapter! Thank you for this. Yanagi and Kirihara are so awesome for me in this fic and the thing with Yagyuu and Niou just kills me. Yagyuu why you're my favorite PoT megane gentleman WHY ;__;

[reposoir]

Poor Yagyuu--he really comes off as an atrocious douche in this series, doesn't he? He needs some love. And redemption. (All in good time ;)

Thank you so very much!