This was well written and very powerful, but I can't honestly say that I enjoyed it; I spent too much of it in tears. Brendon's voice comes through very clearly and Jon... Thank you for sharing this.
I am a little confused on Brendon's timeline but that could very well just be me.
THE SEX FTW. I'm sure I'll love you more if you made ryan met a new boy than keltie. his action toward brendon made my hope go up, and up and then down cos of keltie rofl.
OH YEAH, DO YOU WRITE ANY TOM/SPENCER? *cross fingers*
fuuuuck, i knew it! its because my friend put in the italics for me because i'm pissing my period key, and when i got it back i noticed the first letter in sentences were missing, there was random numbers all over the place but i thought i had gotten most of them. craaaap! alright, thanks for letting me know though. i'll go through it once more. that happened a lot though? throughout the entire thing?
idk what to say, I totally liked it but the way Ryan, Jon and Spencer behaved toward Brendon when Jon was breaking up with him was so heartbreaking, I almost cried and also the part they rejected him:( and the message ... duh you made me cry but it was really good:)
Thank you! Tbh, I really didn't mean for this fic to be so upsetting. I mean, I knew it had it's sad parts, but now I kind of feel bad to see how people are reacting to it, lol. I'm glad you still liked it though, even if it broke your heart. <3
You're welcome:0 I think you should write a sequel, like a year or 2 later and Brendon is somebody. He can be friends with Ryan and Spencer and Pete and everyone else, he can go on tour without getting temped:P
I think it's good because in this story it's not really clear if Brendon has changed or not, he might get back to how he was so ... it's only a suggestion:)
hmm, well i'll think about it, but i'm not so sure. i'm usually not one for sequels, unless i've planned it from the very beginning, but i'll definitely see. mostly, i ended it that way so you can kind of draw your own conclusions (which i'm betting mostly everyone choose it working out and them living happily ever after haha)
but who knows, maybe i'll think up a brilliantly plotline, haha. it's just usually i cant write something strictly fluffy, i have to put a little drama in there, and i think the two of them have had enough of that, lol.
brendon was so complex it was ridiculous. i felt so horrible for him through out this whole fic, because that's the worst life style for him to throw himself in after what he went through- getting kicked out of your house when you're so young, & just for doing stupid teenage shit because you're a kiddd & you're supposed to make those mistakes- & then getting severely punished for them, kicked-out-of-your-house punished, and then being forced to feel like you're not even worth TRYING for, for christ's sake, not even worth shit to your own parents.... and then being thrown on a tour full of horny dudes who couldn't care less what you're feeling, as long as you're sucking their dick, than whatever, right? (ps: good job making me hate tom. i know he apparently 'didn't mean anything' by telling all of jon's friends or whatever, or so you said, but what a dick, seriously.) anyway, brendon was just a baby in this story, a fucking puppy, wounded & so small; getting smaller by each moment. that
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oh gosh. wow. thanks so much! you dont know how much your comment makes me happy :D i'm really, really glad you liked it so much! i'm beyond flattered.
and thank you for taking the time to write me such a deliciously long comment, rambly or not ;]
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I am a little confused on Brendon's timeline but that could very well just be me.
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I'm sorry to hear that though. I tend to create sad stories without fully realizing it. Sorry for causing so many tears. <3
What do you mean? I can try to clarify it/fix it.
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DUDE. the hardest chapters were chapter 4 and 5, that's seriously playing with my emotion. dammnit.
good aspect from your fic, you made brendon's parents so understanding, unlike others. AND JON WALKER OHMYJON. seriously.
but. whoa, typos dude. not bothering me, though, but; 50,000 words? whooooooooot. typo.
THE SEX FTW. I'm sure I'll love you more if you made ryan met a new boy than keltie. his action toward brendon made my hope go up, and up and then down cos of keltie rofl.
OH YEAH, DO YOU WRITE ANY TOM/SPENCER? *cross fingers*
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D: there better not be cause i had like 934583478 betas, lol.
anyways, thank you ! :)
glad you liked it.
and no, i've never written any spencer/tom before.
maybe one day, because i've recently just gotten into that pairing.
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I mean, like, at the beginning of a new sentence.
like, endon
and you wrote a dialogue without " at the beginning of the dialogue.
I MEAN, DUDE, FOR A 50,000 FIC, THAT'S JUST. you know, awwwwww rofl.
YES I LIKED THIS.
okay, I'm sad people havent noticed how hot spencer/tom is rofl
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its because my friend put in the italics for me because i'm pissing my period key, and when i got it back i noticed the first letter in sentences were missing, there was random numbers all over the place but i thought i had gotten most of them. craaaap!
alright, thanks for letting me know though. i'll go through it once more.
that happened a lot though? throughout the entire thing?
yes, me too :(
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I totally didn't mean for this fic to be so depressing =\
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Tbh, I really didn't mean for this fic to be so upsetting. I mean, I knew it had it's sad parts, but now I kind of feel bad to see how people are reacting to it, lol.
I'm glad you still liked it though, even if it broke your heart.
<3
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I think it's good because in this story it's not really clear if Brendon has changed or not, he might get back to how he was so ... it's only a suggestion:)
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i'm usually not one for sequels, unless i've planned it from the very beginning, but i'll definitely see.
mostly, i ended it that way so you can kind of draw your own conclusions (which i'm betting mostly everyone choose it working out and them living happily ever after haha)
but who knows, maybe i'll think up a brilliantly plotline, haha. it's just usually i cant write something strictly fluffy, i have to put a little drama in there, and i think the two of them have had enough of that, lol.
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brendon was so complex it was ridiculous. i felt so horrible for him through out this whole fic, because that's the worst life style for him to throw himself in after what he went through- getting kicked out of your house when you're so young, & just for doing stupid teenage shit because you're a kiddd & you're supposed to make those mistakes- & then getting severely punished for them, kicked-out-of-your-house punished, and then being forced to feel like you're not even worth TRYING for, for christ's sake, not even worth shit to your own parents.... and then being thrown on a tour full of horny dudes who couldn't care less what you're feeling, as long as you're sucking their dick, than whatever, right? (ps: good job making me hate tom. i know he apparently 'didn't mean anything' by telling all of jon's friends or whatever, or so you said, but what a dick, seriously.) anyway, brendon was just a baby in this story, a fucking puppy, wounded & so small; getting smaller by each moment. that ( ... )
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you dont know how much your comment makes me happy :D
i'm really, really glad you liked it so much! i'm beyond flattered.
and thank you for taking the time to write me such a deliciously long comment, rambly or not ;]
<333
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