The Syndicate Method of How to Get Rid of Annoying Pink Interlopers

May 06, 2006 02:25

What's that you say? That pink thing from the last installment was annoying? Well, you're not the only one to think so. Join the Syndicate crew as they show that hussy the door. Poor Mr. Pink, if only he knew how his color was being abused. remycognac, vanillahellsing, and myself present you with the first of many Syndicate bar brawls. Enjoy.

Part Nine: In Which the Garbage is Taken Out )

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kipcha09 May 6 2006, 11:39:50 UTC
Thank You so much, this fic is quite possibly the best hang over cure I have come across to date. ^_^

Much love for the Syndicate series, it always brightens my day. Can't wait for the next edition! Excellent work!

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m_buggie May 6 2006, 23:39:51 UTC
The concept of this fic being a hangover cure makes me giggle madly. Does it work better than two Advil or a Prairie Oyster? I'm sure it's easier to stomach than the latter, at the very least.
Ha-ha, yes, the Syndicate is slowly taking over the world! This chapter was certainly fun to write. Because, really, how many of us have wanted to do that?

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kipcha09 May 11 2006, 10:17:42 UTC
Well, I'd been taking pain killers and such since 5.00am, and nothing was working, I was sick as a dog. I finally managed to get to the computer, and as I was reading, the symptoms started to fade away, until I was left with a slight sickness feeling and the odd bit of a headache, which both remained for the rest of the day.

So, I'm betting it was the Syndicate, it always makes me feel better anyway, just doubly so with the hangover ^^

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m_buggie May 14 2006, 07:56:42 UTC
The Reservoir Syndicate: now with twice the pep! ::laugh::

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gorgon_mythos May 6 2006, 16:55:12 UTC
*shakes my head laughing and half-dazed*

That was an utterly beautiul, off the wall, crack!chapter. The pink nightmare can fight?! And has suddenly declared love for Orange?! (well, that I can get ;) ) LOL Loved the little jumps back to Blonde's gutter-mind inner monologue :P Well done, as usual.

*Hands you well earned Ring Pops and ups the anty with chocolate gold coins*

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m_buggie May 6 2006, 23:49:27 UTC
Of course Mary Sue can fight, better than anyone else and with more flair. She also has prettier hair, better skin, nicer eyes, a more attractive figure, and cooler clothes than everyone else. She is Mary Sue, after all.
::rolls eyes, laughs, and winks::
By the way, this has little or nothing to do with the fic, but this has always cracked me up:
http://piratemonkeysinc.com/ms1.htm
It sums things up much more humorously than I.

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therosiergirl May 10 2006, 01:15:05 UTC
Wow, the Sue is terrifying! Her sparkly purple pepper-spray like substance was truly disturbing, and the way she actually looked like she might win... It's tempting in these kind of stories to have the canon characters totally PWN the Sue, and the fact that you made it a struggle raises this above the average lets-make-fun-of-mary-sue fic. Looking forward to her presumably horrible vengence.

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m_buggie May 14 2006, 07:59:07 UTC
It never ceases to amaze me how characters can take on lives of their own and travel in directions both expected and not. The Sue that is Mary just happened to be one of them...well, sort of.
And yes, you presume correctly about her vengeance. But I'll speak no more of that; can't give the twist away, you know?

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anonymous February 9 2011, 05:17:13 UTC
AWESOME fanfic! Such good storyline & writing, Tarantino would be proud.

Just a question though - have you finished part 10 yet? I can't wait...

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