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m_buggie in resdog_fic

Another Morning at the Syndicate

Sep 08, 2006 08:45

Let's face it, mornings can be rough...especially when you've got a hangover. The folks at the Syndicate will the first to tell you that. However, they'll also be the first to tell you that sometimes you've just got to suck it up and get on with the day. That's particularly true when there's a big score ont he horizon that needs to be prepared ( Read more... )

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kipcha09 September 12 2006, 13:36:53 UTC

I should get into the habit of always commenting on these as soon as I've read them, or else, it slips my mind.

I'm really running out of ways to say: Loved this!

Brown was absolutely fantastic! Loved his part in this chapter. I adored the part between White and Orange, especially the reference of Orange being like a needy cat. Much Love!!

"“Halloo? Olly-olly-oxen-free,” Brown called out from the staircase."

Love it! Love it! Love it!

m_buggie September 12 2006, 20:19:12 UTC

The boys are so much fun, be they drinking or recovering from drinking. I'm glad you liked it so much!

gorgon_mythos September 13 2006, 04:45:54 UTC

You guys are posting new chapters faster than I can reply to them! (can I just say I love that and will bribe the muses anything to keep the trend going ;) )

I love that even a hung-over O-ren still thinks and moves with a grace adn eloquence, and that a hung-over Elle is nearly the same as a sober Elle ;D The cutest bedroom scene between White and Orange- the oddest combination of parent to child relationship while going nowhere near the ick factor of that statement, keeping it still in their romantic relationship....Doesn't compliment well in text, but let's just say your writing has a wonderful strike of balence that I applaud :P

And, just, yes. Brown should never be left unsupervised ;D

m_buggie September 13 2006, 04:57:48 UTC

::cracks knuckles:: No sense in letting a perfectly good roll of writing go to waste! Got to crank them out before the writer's block sets in again.

I love those ladies. I'm so happy that they got included in the Syndicate story because they add such fun to the whole equation. It's damn difficult to keep them both in character, though. They can be a tricky pair of bitches. ::laugh::

Aw, I'm so happy that you liked the White/Orange exchange in the bedroom. The age difference can't be ignored but it can be played off in different ways. I'm glad it translated well.

Brown...yeah...he's special.