Vengeance (part 15)

[respicefinem08]

“Is master Liu home?” Tao asked the guards as the car drove up to the entrance of the manor.

“We were told he left Macau early morning, so most likely, he is, sir.”

“Thank you,” he got out of the car to see one of the servants standing at the doorway, clearly waiting for his arrival.

“Master Tao,” he

Comments

[paranoia_woman]

Wow, you've been a busy bee this holiday. This part is great. I'm really interested in getting to know why Sergei wants to get so close to Takaba. I'm happy for the double release too. I needed something to do this weekend. I'm bored.

[respicefinem08]

a busy bee indeed hehe

Thank you for hard work!

[checklost]

As I have mentioned earlier every time, which is quite frequently, when I check my friend's page on LiveJoural I look for your story. It's always exiting to find your posting, especially this story.

I feel a little dizzy from jumping different locations and once even back in time, but I don't really have trouble following the many threads of a story. Like a high quality carpet, he story is starting to shape into a even growing and intricate pattern. I am looking forward to see how you will get Sergie on that list and have Takaba choose him.

I really enjoyed the replay of the conversation between Yoh and Takaba and Sergie's thoughts on the subject.

Thank you for working hard and I am looking forward to continuation of this story,
Joanna

Re: Thank you for hard work!

[respicefinem08]

thank you

P.S. TKPop...

[darkangel105]

I think it got interesting too, both chapters. Even though there are different point of views from different characters it's starting to pull the plot together =).

[respicefinem08]

I certainly hope so...

[photoash]

Ooo interesting. I loved how you handled Sergie's digestion of Takaba and Yoh's conversation! And Takaba getting so upset about Asami was fantastic. Hopefully we can see some more from his POV soon? I really like how you've twisted Takaba but still maintained an integrity in his character :) it's fascinating! Thanks for the double update I really enjoy this story :D

[respicefinem08]

Takaba's getting hard to write now...haha...

but glad you enjoyed it!

[phoenix_dee]

First thanks for the double update!! The story is going great. It is getting more and more interesting. I'm most curious about where Sergie's character will end up. Looking for ward to finding out. ^___^

[respicefinem08]

...the update might take a while...my vacation is coming to an end...haha