Cold (Viewfinder song ficlet)

[respicefinem08]

“I’m sorry,” his whisper fell, literally, onto deaf ears.

Looking back at me I see
That I never really got it right

And did it matter to the stone whether there was a man before him or not, paying tribute to the skeleton beneath it? Not to the stone, perhaps, but to the man that knelt, it mattered. To the skeleton beneath...even to the

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[phonoi]

That was really well writen. *tear* And yeah it can be speak for both Akihito or Asami. I guess there is something in common between them after all.

[respicefinem08]

They have much more in common than they realize I think.

[trimethoprim]

Thats really a great and touching piece, kept concise. Your symbolism captures me and it gives dozens of material for me to ramble about *cough,cough

[respicefinem08]

Writing such a short piece at first irked me a bit (you know me, I go for the high word count). But oh well, it came out somehow. Now...if I can just get writing on Vengeance. I'm quite stuck on that actually. It's hard to bring them all together...sigh...but with all the mountains of papers on top of me, I can't see myself writing until after everything's blown over...that might be a while.

P.S. I checked out the photos

P.P.S. I need help on Vengeance...

P.P.P.S. I almost forgot...welcome back! :)

[trimethoprim]

haha high word count indeed, but please take your time with vengeance. Its hard to concentrate on something, when more important things are waiting to be accomplished. Ahh sadly I messed up the exam yesterday, though it was not the most difficult one, guess this is always the problem. The easy ones I'm often underestimating, and profs tend to think their particular fields are the most important ones, urks. So after the four regular ones still ahead for me, I have to repeat this one, and then I must also look for a diss, so I can understand you, dont stress yourself with Vengeance. I guess its no good to brood about something, when ones not up to it. It wont help your story to write something you yourself maybe aren't content with, it could mess up the whole thing. And with all the characters and strands you have to be careful too, to not get caught up in contradictions. What for help do you need with vengeance?

[respicefinem08]

Haha, it's a very general problem. I don't know what I can make Mikhail do so that it will cause major problems for Yoh and Takaba without doing the cliche "I'm going to kidnap your lover, haha!" I don't want to completely demonize Mikhail since...well...he's just not that kind of "evil" person. He does what he need to do. Period.

So...yeah... any ideas?

[mizuki_sama]

Beautiful. That's all I can say :) Thank you ! ^^

[respicefinem08]

thank you! I'm glad you liked it!

[lechimie]

Hello,
I would really like to read some of your fics especially "Vengeance," but i couldn't read some parts could you add me as a friend please. Oh yeah, and my birthday is 01/25/1986 if you need to know.

Thanks

[respicefinem08]

added!

[anonymous]

Wow, your a great writer. I especially love nostalgi, and descend w/me. Thank u 4 sharing ur thoughts, prespective w/us.