Vengeance

Jan 03, 2009 10:04

            “Fuck…” Takaba groaned, slapping the white wall behind him, head tilted back, biting his lower lip. Sweat matted his hair down, plastered it against his forehead. He thought he might split, might break, God, it had been a hell of a long time.

He felt Sergei slow and place a warm hand on Takaba’s trembling stomach, “Am I… ( Read more... )

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jamie310 September 5 2009, 01:28:32 UTC
Awesome and thank you for sharing (**)

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respicefinem08 October 8 2009, 19:29:26 UTC
thanks for reading!

by the way, love you icon. Where's it from?

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jamie310 October 9 2009, 16:43:59 UTC
My icon is from APH(*_)

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respicefinem08 December 19 2009, 03:01:07 UTC
forgive me for my ignorance, but... APH?

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gravidy February 22 2010, 03:58:50 UTC
I think I freaked a little when I got to the end and found Vengeance dead. But at least you gave us a bit of an ending. Your work is the type of writing that inspires. Your voice is strong and unique and I would love to see original stories from you. I hope you're still writing anything. Thank you for the stories and, man, thank you for the inspiration. Great writing just gets me all up and jazzed and ready to write.

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respicefinem08 March 5 2010, 19:56:30 UTC
yeah... my apologies about the ending...
but thank you for the kind words :)

And I have a new story going, but it's going slow. Currently in midterm season and paper deadlines just keeping stacking up.

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loyal.. yaoirin_89 March 18 2012, 16:18:48 UTC
even if so many years have past, i still re-read your story without fail.. i think this is the tenth time or something.. do you not write anymore fics?

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