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Dusted With Ash - Smallville ; 2 Drabbles

Dec 02, 2009 19:37

Title: Dusted With Ash
Fandoms: Smallville
Characters/Pairings: Chloe/Davis
Rating: pg-13
Warnings/Spoilers: haven't even bothered with season 9, but AU for the ending of season 8.
Summary: He gasps in breaths through lungs that are far unused to the actions.
AN: Trying to get over both a creativity block and practicing for a portfolio in the ( Read more... )

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Comments 5

vagrantdream December 3 2009, 04:28:41 UTC

The Chloe/Davis one.
Oh wow that was fast. Yay yay YIPEEE! I like it when you try and get over creativity block. XD Nothing seems to be blocked!

The room darkens around him with quickening breaths that leave his mind spinning in dizzying circles
(like when he was younger and pretended it was just a game).

This has always just really hurt to think of, even before Eternal, can you imagine a kid going through that. A kid trying to deal-even if through a game?

This is all beautiful. So beautiful. There will never be enough aus to that finale.
And so few words. I've seen 4000 word fics that didn't say as much.

"Chloe", he gasps, eyes flashing red as she sadly smiles.And you are killing me with the ambiguity ( ... )

restlessme December 4 2009, 01:02:47 UTC

Is it sad that I still have a block than? lol

And truly thank you so much for all the compliments, they really make my day! Also glad that the shortness of the stories don't take away from them, because I often think it does.

Honestly have to say, I really love all the interpretations you've managed to find from it.

Really I was going off of the fact that in the comics, Doomsday is basically impossible to kill.
So Davis really never dies in my opinion and this is just one more of his rebirths.

Wish I had a much poetic revealing, but that's really the base of it. And you're more than welcome to archive!

eternal_moonie December 3 2009, 09:13:45 UTC

totally AWESOME story and drabble!

restlessme December 4 2009, 01:03:01 UTC

Thank you so much for the comment! :)

vagrantdream December 4 2009, 01:15:56 UTC

Not that I would *at all* be opposed to a longer one. :p

I love the entire rebirth idea. Because being lost in a void of heated darkness to die and wake again is quite worse that death. (And Doomsday never dies, that's the point, oh show.) I can see why Chloe's crying. Ahh!

Just AWE.SOME