kh fic; my body is a cage

[retraux]

fandom: kingdom hearts
pairing: axel/sora, with very very slight sora/riku.
a/n: this is for shesayslove, who is wonderful and amazing and wrote me something incredibly beautiful ♥ and i hope that this is good enough, and that i will do your (and my) favourite pairing justice.

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[xxthorny]

hlshlafkjsdhfkajshlkdjfhlakshdflkajshdlk!!!

This thing right here?

PRETTY DARN AWESOME.

The dreams where he couldn't quite make out things? Those were the best!

DUDE I LIKE THIS.

How did you make me feel a bit sad for Axel's death, I've never felt sad for Axel's death (partially because I played CoM and DAYS after, and he didn't have a whole lot of screentime in 2...).

I love how you divided it up, too; this style of writing is just gorgious.

WRITE MORE STUFF, PLEASE

[retraux]

lol, nearly all of my dreams are like that. i can barely remember anything about them after i wake up and when i do its always really vague weird stuff.

ngl, i never found axel's death that sad. particularly after seeing that one scene from final mix where he sees roxas again after he dies. i always thought that meant roxas' soul left sora and went with him, so he got what he wanted in the end :< apparently the rest of kh fandom doesn't share this view.

man i'll def try to write more but i'm kind of worried this sudden BURST OF INSPIRATION (woah two whole fics in one week calm the fuck down there son) is just going to disappear after this :/

but i'll still try!

[shesayslove]

Oh, oh gosh, I'm so, so, so sorry that I didn't comment earlier. ;.; I have been trying to come-up with some way to say what I mean, because what I mean is, I am in love with this, and it is beautiful. <3 And you should never ever ever doubt your writing, because it is lovely, and I adore it, and. <3

[retraux]

ah, that's so strange that you love this song as well. but i guess it works out nicely! you know, i hadn't even heard it at all until very recently, because i had been recommended arcade fire by somebody, and when i listened to it for the first time i thought that it was entirely for these two. something about it fits perfectly.

i am just so, so glad you like this <3 because i was a little worried, that maybe i was rusty from that long block or something like that. and i might even still feel like that sometimes, but it's always wonderful to have someone reassure you of these things <33

haha, i was actually kind of happy with that last part! it sort of flowed out, without any real thinking about it, so i think maybe it was just right.

and i'm so incredibly happy that you like it <3 -hugs back-

[gantai]

alex omg. ;o;

i don't even have words for how lovely but painful this was. ;o;