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ruethereal June 24 2011, 06:44:56 UTC
GOOD GOD this is awesome and epic and perfect and amazing and JFC your Taebb and I DIED aklsdjaskdj I can't even begin to tell you how much I love this so I'll stop trying

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retried June 24 2011, 22:50:29 UTC
for some reason i tend to write taemin like he's doing a better imitation of key than key himself could ever pull off! (if that makes sense. which it doesn't.) ty for reading ♥ :)

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musicsporty1 June 24 2011, 06:59:07 UTC
haha so cute!
at first i wasn't sure i would like this, with minho's character being what it is and kibum not being the usual confident bamf. XDD but this was so good! it made me laugh~~~

thanks for sharing!!^o^

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retried June 24 2011, 22:51:21 UTC
haha, i'm not really used to writing shinee so i tend to go nontraditional/noncorrect (incorrect) routes with my characterizations X3;; thank you for giving it a chance anyway! ♥

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jinkibumiminho June 24 2011, 07:26:44 UTC
StarTrek. You put in StarTrek. With Janeway. Marry me?

“But… you’re straight…” says Kibum.

“It’s college,” says Taemin.
This reminds me so much of the following conversation:
"Ever smoked pot?"
"Yeah, I went to college."

I'm not even mad about the complete glossing over of the smut because you did it so seamlessly.

Wonderful, wonderful (now I'm channeling Lawrence Welk. Put that in your cultural reference pipe and smoke it!).

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retried June 24 2011, 22:52:40 UTC
that was seriously the most self-indulgent paragraph i've ever written :D (if i had my way you would have read the entire conversation, but i'm pretty sure my beta would have killed me!) thank you for reading and commenting :)♥

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jinkibumiminho June 24 2011, 23:01:51 UTC
It's your fic, dammit. Write what you want! [This one time, at the Academy band camp? Like there was this guy Minho who totally went insane when this crazy Worf dude thought Taemin was a girl and tried to show him his clarinet.]

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chocolatos June 24 2011, 07:28:40 UTC
okay, one, i dont know how Kibum could live with Taemin and Jinki as friends =))
and and the scene when Minho suddenly whispers into Kibum's ear like a holy alien literally is what i love the most =))
i mean, holyshit, that scene, where ontae are away from the universe, drowning deeply about the girl in intro to jazz dance and and and... and i'm such a loser for losing words because i've never been one leaving a long comment but but... i can easily picture the situation Kibum gets himself into at that moment =))

and two, i mean three.. or yeah, Jjong is such a cute thing even when he drools on his textbook =))

Jongkey ftw =))

oke i lie, i love Minkey buuuuuuut i love this one too =))

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chocolatos June 24 2011, 08:41:34 UTC
BESIDEEs... it's really a though decision Kibum being forced to choose between staring at Taem's crotch or staring at his face.

ok i'm done

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blingblingdiva June 24 2011, 09:14:12 UTC
lol i knew you'd notice that minkey's whispering part keke ;))

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retried June 24 2011, 22:53:25 UTC
aww thank you so much for the lovely comment, and for reading even though it's not really your thing!! :3 ♥

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retried June 24 2011, 22:53:49 UTC
aww thank you so much! taemin was so much fun to write :) ty for reading! :D

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