looking for a place to happen

[retroject]

looking for a place to happen
yunho/jaejoong
g; 607w.
for honesthours

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[maxism12]

mine brb reading

[maxism12]

Maybe they're being young and foolish

Jaejoong realises later that home is the press of Yunho's hand on the small of his back, warm and comforting;

their lives, like their belongings stuffed into cardboard boxes, jumbled up and intertwined beyond recognition.

That the familiarity he craves for, he can find it in Jaejoong

Sunday mornings spent in their cramped makeshift bed of a car back seat, pilfering kisses and warmth from one another.

I am kind of speechless at how wonderfully you have managed to capture the feel of a pair wandering souls and the way you have put it into simple words makes it all the more beautiful, it's very well written and I love the idea behind this, lovely.

Thank you for sharing ♥

[ninghui465]

This was lovely. I especially liked the third last paragraph :)
The way you managed to piece together their fragmented lives into such a short piece is... I don't know, breathtaking.
Thank you for sharing ^^

[boxxme]

i like how jaejoong is spontaneous in this as well, and how his love for yunho doesn't waver even in such an unstable environment.. lovely piece!

[yozora_yume]

this is so beautifully written bb!!<333 Loved it!!! I'd quote so much but then I'll end up rewriting your fic so just settle with the thought that I loved every meaning you incorporated into words <33

[all_nostalgia]

It felt like reading my dream of an ideal relationship. Plus, the way its written, minimalistic but the meanings are all bursting at the seams. This is just too simple and brilliant~ <3