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Fic: The End and the Beginning (8/9)

Jan 17, 2015 10:30

Title: The End and the Beginning (8/9)
Author: reve_silencieux
Rating: PG-13
Characters/Pairing: Neal, Peter, Sara, Mozzie, Jones, Elizabeth, OFC (N/S)
Spoilers: Season Five
Warnings: Spoilery (highlight to read) Permanent Injury - Paralysis
Word Count: 49,000 (This chapter: 5637)
Beta: sapphire2309
Summary: Five years after the events of The Last Con, Peter and Jones ( Read more... )

neal/sara, character: mozzie, white collar, wc fic, character: neal, series: the last con, character: sara, character: peter

Comments 8

caseyf123 January 17 2015, 17:48:18 UTC

Excellent chapter. so glad Peter and Mozzie are working together to bring down the man who tried to have Neal killed. The end recounting the stuffed dog and the loss of Satchamo was poignant and heartbreaking.

sheenianni January 17 2015, 18:02:55 UTC

Yay, Mozzie and Peter working together!!! And I LOVE how Mozzie knew what happened and that he was slowly taking revenge on Gregory and doing it the "right" way how Neal would have liked. Go Mozzie!!!

Although now I really want him to find out that Neal is alive. Maybe if they make a painting for bringing down the guys that Peter was chasing in the beginning, Mozzie will recognize it as too good and connect the dots?

And poor Peter, heartbroken not just because of Neal but with Satchmo dead too. The toy... so well done. *Hugs him.

Lovely chapter and I can't wait for the conclusion and for anything else you have in this universe :)

dieastra January 17 2015, 19:09:48 UTC

I agree. Neal would have to put in deliberate mistakes, otherwise Mozzie might recognize it.

dieastra January 17 2015, 22:30:25 UTC

Eh - where is my comment? I wrote one, I know!

I feel so much with Peter - it is one thing to learn to live with Neal's death, but to know he is there and not being able to talk to him must be so much harder.

Hopefully they'll find a way out of it, I see Mozzie is working on it already.

pipilj January 18 2015, 17:18:41 UTC

Another great update. Seems Neal has taken Peter's justice vs revenge lesson to heart,

scarym1 January 18 2015, 18:35:08 UTC

It was funny that after going through all that trouble to find Mozzie, Peter finds out that all he had to do was to ask El. ;)

I am glad that Mozzie agreed to work with Peter to take down Gregory.

Peter unexpectedly finding Satchmo's stuffed dog (that Neal gave him) was heartbreaking. ((((PETER)))))