Comments | reve_silencieux: Fic: Karma

reve_silencieux

Fic: Karma

Apr 29, 2016 11:34

Title: Karma
Author: reve_silencieux
Rating: PG
Characters/Pairing: Neal, Sara, Peter, Diana, Jones, Mozzie, Elizabeth (N/S)
Spoilers: None
Word Count: 1,400
Beta: sherylyn
Summary: You know what they say about Karma... it's about to hit Neal hard.
Series: A Time and a Place for Everything
Author's Note: This is yet another short fic from my old fluffy series that I ( Read more... )

neal/sara, character: mozzie, white collar, wc fic, character: neal, series: a time and a place, character: sara, character: peter

Comments 25

pooh_collector April 29 2016, 19:35:58 UTC

This was great! I loved the different vignettes and how you managed to weave all of our favorite characters into this story.

And twin Neals! Oh my!

reve_silencieux April 30 2016, 20:53:55 UTC

Thanks! When I first got this idea (oh, so long ago!), I just kept tacking on everyone's reaction as it came to me. It was too much fun!

Twin Neals... yep. They're in for a wild ride.

sheenianni April 29 2016, 20:47:59 UTC

Now come on Caffrey family, boys are great, promise :) (Speaking as the older sister to four younger brothers, LOL.)

Nice story :)

reve_silencieux April 30 2016, 20:55:00 UTC

I'm sure boys are great, but would you want two identical mini-Neal's running around?? They're going to be a handful!

Thanks!

sheenianni May 2 2016, 15:11:48 UTC

LOL, definitely :D (But still great to have at home :) )

hurinhouse April 29 2016, 21:47:13 UTC

adorable!!

I totally get too busy to continue but... is there any way you could add an epilogue so you can name the boys? ;)

reve_silencieux April 30 2016, 20:55:58 UTC

Thanks!

Well... ask you and shall receive. You managed to plant a bunny in my head. Epilogue is up!

hurinhouse April 30 2016, 21:07:03 UTC

Yay! Off to check it out....

ladyrose42 April 29 2016, 22:53:45 UTC

At least George would be using Neal's middle name. Really enjoyed how you tortured Neal at every turn and Sara ruling the roost. Uncle Moz: now he's a handful.

reve_silencieux April 30 2016, 20:58:02 UTC

Very true! I hadn't thought about that.

Oh, Peter's going to enjoy this for a very, very long time. Neal is finally going to get a taste of his own medicine. As for Uncle Moz... heh. Epilogue is up, he has his own, shall we say, problems.

Thanks!

pipilj April 30 2016, 18:55:27 UTC

Aww this is adorable, yup it is Karma if Neal has twin boys :D. Nice to see the geeky side to Peter

reve_silencieux April 30 2016, 20:59:18 UTC

Thanks! It would be fun to see Neal handling twins. And yes, Peter does know about Harry Potter. I had a lot of fun with that bit.