FANFIC DUMP I: IchiHime, Gen

[revenue_rice]

Title:Impulse
Pairing:Ichigo x Orihime
Rating: G
Authors Notes: Don’t own, belongs to Shonen Jump and Kubo.

Comments

[angel_puppeteer]

It's... it's pretty, i think. reading this is like staring at a peaceful-looking portrait. i like how straightforward your narration is. not wordy. simple words. reading this, i dunno, it evokes such warm, easy feeling, you know? a very good read. i like it very much!

and this,

“That’s why it was so easy.” Ichigo admitted sheepishly “It seemed like the only thing that makes sense at the moment. You and me. Just being normal, married together. I didn’t think it would be scary.”

is love. :D

[revenue_rice]

Haha, thank you for the kind words.

[giethe]

Not bad. Spotted a couple of grammar problems and wayward capitalization, but it's rather interesting in itself. An Ichigo being as spontaneous as Orihime is a nice twist.

[revenue_rice]

Yes, there are quite a few aren't they? Will review the whole thing and find a beta, thank you for your helpful suggestions. :D

[sweety8587]

*long happy sigh* The fandom needs more fanfics like this. Simple, heart warming and just....warm. excellently written. All the dialogue was just pure love <3

[xelijahbabe07x]

adorable!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! <3

[afteriwake]

I really liked this a lot. Especially the last line...Tatsuki really would do that, wouldn't she?