Tabula Rasa: Chapter Seven - The Calm Before

[rever_d_elysium]

Title: Tabula Rasa
Fandom: Kingdom Hearts
Word Count: 5,882 words
Rating: PG-13
Summary: This is the story of a forgotten replica. This is the story of an awakening princess. This is a story of mercenaries and salvation and fairies. And this is a story of people and growing up. [it all started with a blank slate...]

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[presea]

You have no idea how long I was waiting for this. HOORAAYYY. So, onto the chapter.

I love the way you write Kairi. It's almost enough to make me like her. Almost. If I ever do find myself writing Kairi, it will definitely be with a sincerely redhead twist. Thank you for giving her a personality I can enjoy. You actually write their whole friendship very well. Riku doesn't HAVE time or energy to mope, not when Sora and Kairi are around.

I found one typo. One. Which is amazing.

"but she suspected Donald was the cause of it, He certainly looked smug after."

All in all, great chapter. You'd think it'd be filler but it was actually really good lead-up.

♥

[rever_d_elysium]

I KNOW SORRY I TOOK SO LONG. I'm hoping to get at least one and a half chapters written over break, so.

Kairi is fun to write, and I like giving her a personality that is both IC nd not...doormat-ish. Now that I think about it, this is kinda like Yuna's pilgrimage in FFX. Only Aeons are much more kickass than anything Kairi's got. I also absolutely LOVE writing the different relationships. And RIKU. I was like "okay, Riku's an emo-magnet. BUT NOT RIGHT NOW" and tried to think up IC things that would make him antiemo or something. >_>

Oooh, thanks! Fixed now. ^_^

That makes me so happy -- I know the last one REALLY reads like filler in some places, and was trying not to do that with this. Also, it's building the dynamics and such for later on.

[demonicfangirl]

Donald snorted. “We don’t let him do anything.” <- BEST LINE EVARH!!!! LOL! ^_^

[rever_d_elysium]

Isn't it? XD *loves on snarky!Donald*