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[kainasilverbane]

Title: Shards
Author/Penname: Kainasilversbane
Rating:PG-13
Chapters: Chapter 11 (continued WIP)
Pairings: Fujitaka/Kaho centered
Summary: So the battle begins, falling through darkness, and tests for each. Will they pass them all, or go insane before they finish?
Warning, Notes: There's a Gremlins reference in there.
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Comments

[claire_chan]

Okay, I'm still a little foggy on this tasks issue. So it's like a video game type thing where you have to beat all the minibosses before you get to the final boss battle? XD

Philosophical discussion starter... does Nakuru even have a soul? (Or any of the guardians, for that matter?) She was created by Eriol, not naturally.. I know in 'holic, Maru and Moro don't. How would we be able to tell? Hmmmm.. I know Nakuru definitely has more of a spark of life than Maru/Moro..

He too felt the cold, overpower darkness that they were floating through, and was having the same difficulties that Kaho had. overpowering darkness.

He couldn’t explain why the sight brought tears to his eyes, but they did all the same. It did? Sight is singular.

What he didn’t know was that beyond that point, he would wish he was still falling among those lost, and sometimes forgotten, souls. This is very ominous, I like it.

Everywhere but right where the were was pitch black. They were.

Where they lay came was a small, bluish white glow that none of them could

[kainasilverbane]

*has just gotten a chance to sit down and read this whole thing

[claire_chan]

A A A A A!! *mash* Man, I want to play the Kaho game now. XDDD

That whole soul thing makes sense to me. ^__^ Cool. I guess that leads to another question I've been pondering... outside of extenuating circumstances (i.e. a master being possessed by demons :P) can they directly disobey their masters? Or is there something bound within the magic they have bestowed upon them..

I don't mind your typos, we fixed them now.

[kainasilverbane]

good question...too bad CLAMP isn't a little more...accessable...*laughs* Or I'd ask! XD

LOL!!!! You can just see a rumpled, blurry eyed Kaho saying, "I hate video games..." *Is bombarded with more button mashing*

When I gain a will of my own again, I shall definitely doodle that. If you aren't fast asleep yet, I'm on AIM if you wish to tumble on for a bit

[anonymous]

ummm yeah im just a person...

I like your story and Fujitaka is one of my favorite characters... But where is Yue? Since he is the other guardian and all...

[kainasilverbane]

Considering Yukito is away at college, I kept Yue out of the story. That, and I'm really not very good at characterizing him anyways right now, so keeping him out is better than him being badly written anyways. ^_^

You've read the whole thing so far? Not just this chapter? You'd be hella confused if you've just read this chapter XD

I'm glad you like it!