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Bring forth the jury!

Oct 18, 2006 08:38

Title: Coated
Author/Penname: Claire-chan
Rating: G
Chapters: One shot
Pairings: Eriol/Syaoran
Summary: A cold walk to school. Response to the 25_streetsigns prompt Yield.
Warning, Notes: I've been doing way too much motif-work at school. It's leaking into my fanfiction. Argh. Crossposted all over.
Disclaimer: CCS belongs to CLAMP.

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Comments 4

dropsofviolet October 18 2006, 13:44:54 UTC

Well, I already gave you a little review in the other comm, but since you wanted con crit...

Well, I have none to give. This is well-written, with good characterization. It's funny and serious in appropriate places. A good fic. ^_^

claire_chan October 18 2006, 22:54:22 UTC

Thank you so much! ^__^

sheila_chan October 19 2006, 01:48:47 UTC

I agree with rhap_chan. This is well-written. Not a single typo! You characterized them well - Eriol, especially (though it was focused on Syaoran). Great job!

claire_chan October 19 2006, 19:54:43 UTC

Thanks so much!! ^-^

I kept worrying about POV, to be honest. xD It's third-persion limited to Syaoran, but then it sneaks over to Eriol at the end.

I'm glad you thought I characterized them well; non-canon pairings are so much harder to pull off if you don't make the characters close to how they really are in the series @-@