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Continuation of my ongoing editing with this fic. Chapter 8 has been added to the edited part, as has chapter 16 been added at the end, in need of crits. Thank you Sheila for editing 14 and 15!



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**Have yet to be commented on and are in need of crits!

*Chapter 1: http://community.livejournal.com/reviewers_inc/2149.html
*Chapter 2: http://community.livejournal.com/reviewers_inc/4422.html
*Chapter 3: http://community.livejournal.com/reviewers_inc/6033.html
*Chapter 4: http://community.livejournal.com/reviewers_inc/6487.html
*Chapter 5: http://community.livejournal.com/reviewers_inc/6817.html
*Chapter 6: http://community.livejournal.com/reviewers_inc/6930.html
*Chapter 7: http://community.livejournal.com/reviewers_inc/8261.html
*Chapter 8: http://community.livejournal.com/reviewers_inc/8755.html
Chapter 9: http://community.livejournal.com/reviewers_inc/10635.html
Chapter 10: http://community.livejournal.com/reviewers_inc/12262.html
Chapter 11: http://community.livejournal.com/reviewers_inc/12341.html
Chapter 12: http://community.livejournal.com/reviewers_inc/14537.html
Chapter 13: http://community.livejournal.com/reviewers_inc/14802.html
Chapter 14: http://community.livejournal.com/reviewers_inc/14915.html
Chapter 15: http://community.livejournal.com/reviewers_inc/20615.html
**Chapter 16: http://community.livejournal.com/reviewers_inc/21398.html