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Bring for the Jury

Sep 11, 2007 19:54

Title: Shards
Author/Penname: Kainasilversbane
Rating: PG-13
Chapters: 18 (WIP)
Pairings: Fujitaka/Kaho centered
Summary: Short filler with a tiny glimps at what Kaho went through on the road. But very vague. ^_^
Warning, Notes: Silly Sakura Screaming! XD
Link to previous chapter http:// ( Read more... )

stories by kainasilverbane, bring forth the jury!

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sheila_chan October 22 2007, 16:02:09 UTC

Tomoyo’s concert is tonight and this is their dress rehearsal.
-rewrite: Tomoyo's concert is tonight, and dress rehearsal's this morning.:)

Only (apostrophe or write the whole word)cause you’re the daddy of one of the performers,” Kaho mocked,

Fujitaka whined as he rubbed his rear end and (comma) Kaho mocked his grin of superiority.

“(apostroher or write the whole word)Cause you love me!”

Her giggles ceased abruptly(comma) and her eyes became distant,

This chapter's quite short compared to the previous chapters. And yes, you are the queen of cliff hangers.:p