beyond my anger

Mar 17, 2009 19:16

Title: Beyond My Anger
Prompt: un_love_you- I was wrong about you.
Fandom: Lost
Pairing: Jack/Kate [implied Sawyer]
Word Count: 221
Rating: PG
Table: Here.
Spoilers: Through S4 I guess. Doesn't give anything away, though.
Summary: Jack's anger gets the best of him from time to time, and Kate always waits.
Notes: 1/30.

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burnutica March 17 2009, 23:50:30 UTC
Awesome!

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revoked March 18 2009, 01:22:45 UTC
thanks :]

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hintofawhisper March 18 2009, 01:10:18 UTC
Wow. This was so sad, but great, and so well-written for something so short. :D

Honestly, I can't blame Jack for getting angry, but this also makes me feel for Kate too. It's heart-wrenching.

That's why I can only hope that at the end of the show they'll be happy, with no 'what if she's still thinking about him' type of thing straining their relationship.

Wonderful job! I can't wait to read more. :D

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revoked March 20 2009, 19:51:17 UTC
thank you! it means a lot <3

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burgundyshoes March 18 2009, 03:52:49 UTC
Oh god, this was beautiful! You definitely hit the nail on the jangst - and the last few lines were amazing. Can't wait to read more! ♥

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revoked March 20 2009, 19:51:29 UTC
Thanks a lot <3

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wistfulwatcher March 21 2009, 08:51:16 UTC
Oh, heartbreaking! I think you really managed to get to the heart of Jate here, bravo. I especially loved:

It sat on the floor among crushed words.

Thank you!

WW

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revoked March 21 2009, 22:18:45 UTC
thanks! :]

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