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petulant2u November 13 2012, 21:01:16 UTC
Great chapter. Brian needs to let it out. He's been the strong one for too long. Justin needs to be strong for him now.

Love this story!

Gina

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rhapsody_series November 18 2012, 07:12:28 UTC
Brian has been strong, but it's been fake in so many ways because he's ignored a lot of what had gone on. Justin... I can't say that he's going to be able to do that, it was one thing for him to be strong for Brian, for Brian's health, but this is about the two of them, and they honestly both just need to fall apart before any strength can be conjured after this.
Thanks for reading!

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lazy_8s November 13 2012, 21:09:37 UTC

As we have watched Justin begin his road to recovery, Brian, sadly, has not. Now, he's angry, feeling cheated that he was not allowed to grieve in order to keep Justin numb. How will Justin react to this anger? Who knows, but I hope that the anger and grief can be finally be revealed, so that the rift between the two can be bridged. Gorgeous chapter!

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rhapsody_series November 18 2012, 07:13:52 UTC
Thank you so much. You're right, Brian hasn't recovered but neither has Justin, he's taken steps but he's also not exactly sane right now. But the time has come for it all to get out in the open and if they can do it together, than there will be a chance for that bridge.
Thanks for reading

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kiddoditto November 13 2012, 21:51:14 UTC
great chapter

that was heavy. you had me crying . i think i don't need to say beacause of which part

looking forward to the next chapter

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rhapsody_series November 18 2012, 07:15:16 UTC
Thank you, Kiddo
*hands you kleenex*
It is heavy, isn't it? That's how I feel when writing this, that I'm carrying the weight of the world (their world) on my shoulders and it's so fragile that I have to be oh so careful with every last line I write.
Thanks so much for reading,
Rory

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shenova November 14 2012, 00:02:29 UTC
Wow tears in my eyes so sad after reading about the guys getting closer. Read about how it used to be and it's heartbreaking. The struggles they both have sometimes it like I only think about Justin problems but Brian feels it to and so sad about him sitting in their little girls room just losing it. Wonderful part with Brian explaining why he wanted to see Justin have a child with him simply beautiful. Looking forward to reading more soon.

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rhapsody_series November 18 2012, 07:16:42 UTC
Thank you so much.
Brian and Justin have done all they can on their own to deal with this, now it is time for everything to come out in the open.
I'm glad you liked the scene where Brian tells Justin he wants to have a child with him. It was a delicate scene to write and manage to stay in character so I appreciate that.
:)

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anno53 November 14 2012, 00:57:39 UTC
Galeandrandy, you write so beautifully ... sections of this update brought me to tears.

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rhapsody_series November 18 2012, 07:17:13 UTC
Thank you so much, I'm glad the emotion filtered into you as it flowed out of the boys and into me and on the page.
:) Rory

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