[Fancomic] What If...

[rhapsodyoftales]

Title: What if..
Author: rhapsodyoftales
Rating: err PG 13?
Characters/pairing: France/England, Spain
Warning: Hints of sexual suggestion
Summary: What if France cut his hair short

Comments

[crazymabober]

Oh...yes. Shorthair!France looks so...umph! I don't know what to say. It's totally up there with Ponytail!France.

[rhapsodyoftales]

I like Ponytail!France too~!
Thank you~~ <333

[asakura_kindo]

HOLY SH*T!!! Big Brother France!!!!! you look so... Handsome!! Attractive!! Hot!!! Yummy!!! I freaking LOVE IT!!!! X///D

(now I wish Himaruya would draw him with short hair...even if it is just once)

Hahaha I love Spain's appearances xDDDD

Thanks for Sharing!! *___*

[rhapsodyoftales]

^///^ Thank you~

Hope Himaruya draws France with short hair~ We should send request about that XD

[inunobaka]

I like your comic and everything, it was fun. I just happen to be French and one thing bothers me, it's more like nitpicking though but...
Chéri. In this case, dear doesn't translate to cher but chéri (with an extra e at the end if the person you talk to is female)
Cher whatevernameyouwant=Dear when starting a letter.
Chéri(e)=Dear as a petname kind of things.
Mon cher= Dear in a more sarcastic way.
(cher=chère when feminine)
(sorry it's just... one of those things that bother me orz I still loved the comic! it was cute >w<)

[rhapsodyoftales]

Oh, I'm sorry.. So, what the word should be? should it be chéri?
Thank you~
Glad you like it though :)

[inunobaka]

Yeah in the case you used it it's chéri xD
And I'm sorry, I feel bad since it really is nitpicking (I'm pretty sure you're not a French native speaker so xP Can't expect you to be perfect)

[rhapsodyoftales]

No, its okay. I really appreciate your comment
its constructive criticism anyway
I will keep this in mind for future references :)

[m_dono]

FFFFF

Oh France. I know just how you feel, LOL

[rhapsodyoftales]

LOL France likes to tease a lot XDD

[joudan_janai]

A NEW DRAWING OF YOURS 8DDDDDD )o)
Francis looks so handsome with short hair 8D and he looks a bit like his son with Japan, Tamaki (?)/shot
lol Antonio wanting to cut all of his hair xDDD and saying young people this days xDDD
And now I want to pet Francis ;3; xD
So cute and funny x3 I love this so much 8D

[rhapsodyoftales]

Agree, he's like Tamaki XP
Antonio really likes Francis' hair, he wants to cut it all!! XDD