Fic: Secrets, SCC Derek/Sarah

[rhienelleth]

Title: Secrets
Author: Rhien Elleth
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Derek/Sarah
Word Count: 9,950
Spoilers: through season one
Disclaimer: Don't own them, don't profit, just fun and entertaining, nothing to see here, etc
Beta: Thanks to

Comments

[the_grynne]

But unlike them, her determination didn’t come from a directive. It had, once.

Now, it came from her soul.

Yes!!!

This is fantastic.

[rhienelleth]

:-) Thank-you! That whole section was mostly my way of bridging the differences between T2 Sarah and series-Sarah. Plus, I love the movies and wanted to be sure and tie them in as backstory.

[aka_paloma]

Kyle had seen the strength she hadn’t yet known she possessed. Derek saw the weaknesses she wanted to forget she had.

I really like the contrast of these two insights. There's a sort of symmetry with this.

[rhienelleth]

Thanks! It was something that occurred to me while I was writing, but strikes me as true.

(Ohh, Love the Burn Notice icon!)

[indiefic]

Lovely!

[rhienelleth]

Thank-you. :)

[rhienelleth]

And I keep forgetting - but I soooo need an icon of that scene *points to your icon*

[teaotter]

This is really good. I think you've done a great job with Sarah's POV especially.

[miconic]

I'm currently playing around with this new fandom. I like the uneasiness between Derek and Sarah. Even if they can find the words, I'm not sure if they'll say them. Thanks for sharing this part. Can't wait to read the next.