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Sep 16, 2004 02:58


Erase my mind of these tears that freeze as they travel the path of your heart

For your heart as opened a wound that cannot heal

There is no stitch big enough to cover the hole from which my heart has escaped

“With a heart the size of Texas”, one doesn’t have enough blood left to go on dreaming

I walk the streets without a chest, dead as the ( Read more... )

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"erase my mind......" anonymous September 16 2004, 00:18:02 UTC
hi there. i ran across this entry by a random chance. this is a really nice piece...just wanted to comment because i really like this.

be well.

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Re: "erase my mind......" rhinoduff66 September 16 2004, 00:23:51 UTC
wow that was weird i just posted it like 18 seconds ago and was looking at how it came out and there was a comment, odd......but thank you

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Re: "erase my mind......" anonymous September 16 2004, 00:42:36 UTC
you're very welcome! i read some other entries in your journal as well(feeling nosey now) you write some nice things...altho it is a bit dark, but very nice for this soul to read =)

keep on expressing yourself and, be well.

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Re: "erase my mind......" rhinoduff66 September 16 2004, 09:17:05 UTC
haha yeah I guess I do kinda lose it in some of the shit I write, my bad, but I’m glad you like it, you keep reading and commenting and I'll keep expressing......thanks again

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yourxgentleman September 16 2004, 15:53:18 UTC
i love it

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