Comments | rhombus_: Lay Me Down (Kyle/Oliver) *WIP*

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Lay Me Down (Kyle/Oliver) WIP

Aug 27, 2010 14:13

Story Title: Lay Me Down - Chapter Six (*WIP*)
Author's Name: rhombus_
Pairing: Kyle/Oliver
Rating: R
Warnings: AU setting; historical inaccuracies; cliches
Summary: Kish in the Old West. Yep. That about sums it up. AU (of course).
Disclaimer: Characters ≠ mine.

Previous parts:
Chapter One - The Vow
Chapter Two - Our Own Place
Chapter Three - The ( Read more... )

character: kyle lewis, character: oliver fish, fandom: one life to live, pairing: kyle/oliver, fic: lay me down

Comments 10

mariska_lee August 28 2010, 15:32:01 UTC

Poor Kish. They're so protective of each other, and yet that protectiveness puts them at odds with each other. It's so sweet and angsty ( ... )

rhombus_ August 28 2010, 18:52:29 UTC

Aww! Thank you for loving this story!!! It loves you back. :D

Your whole comment is making me a little misty-eyed, in fact... I love your take on the story and the characters. Thank you so much for reading and sharing your thoughts. :)

thesuperpope September 5 2010, 04:17:02 UTC

Oh you know how I feel about this. Just <3 I literally can't wait for the next chapter :D

rhombus_ September 5 2010, 04:52:29 UTC

<3 right back atcha! :D

I'm working on it. Got a little sidetracked with laziness, but it seems to be passing.

greedyy September 15 2010, 14:17:54 UTC

"I never shoulda trusted her with you."
I think I know what your Kyle is thinking. :P Good trick driving Oliver away. It's *magnificent* to see that this story has multiple layers to it. Multi-chaptered fics are supposed to be nicely complex, and you do amazingly well. The building rhythm is just wonderful.

I swear this whole thing has a great potential to be made a blockbuster film. And let me tell you I very rarely say this. Now I'm feeling sorry for not giving you a proper review. I'm beat. *yawns* I was so tired but I *had to* finish reading lol, or I wouldn't be able to sleep.

On a critical note, um, I think this getting-away-from-walter is your first action scene I've read. Hard to write, right? I suck at writing thrillers too. Never get the mood and pacing right. ;) *sighs*

rhombus_ September 15 2010, 15:12:18 UTC

LOL. Yeah, writing action is hard, yo! I think it's maybe obvious that I wanted to get that scene over with as quickly as possible. Move it along, boys!

I love your comment about making this into a film. I see it that way in my head, which sometimes makes it harder to write, because I'm trying to write the scope of it in. But this is one of those "If I were a billionaire, I'd bankroll this baby RIGHT NOW" things. (I'd even buy the character rights off ABC...)

greedyy September 15 2010, 19:01:43 UTC

Nah - you don't have to buy the characters. It's AU. You can just change the names from Kyle and Oliver to Aye and Kliver or something. :D

And oh - screen writing is quite different. I always hate that translating from fiction to films loses some meaning and beauty of the writing, and movie watchers need less imagination than story readers (no fun). But if this is the path to well, then go for it. Your dream that involves certain person (not sure whether I can say this less cryptically in public lol) may come true!! :P

rhombus_ September 15 2010, 21:14:12 UTC

Haha! Yeah, let's keep that on the DL... :P

(But, yes, when the time comes, expect someone to get spoiled rotten!)

radrcks September 21 2010, 02:31:28 UTC

wow, you haven't been around in a while, everything alright?

rhombus_ September 21 2010, 14:01:46 UTC

I'm still here. Haven't fallen off the face of the planet just yet. Got a little bit of writer's block. Then work got busy. Then I got sick. But I'm hoping to have something posted soon.

Thank you for asking about me. :)