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Pulse - Heechul/Gunhee

Jan 01, 2016 20:09

Title: Pulse
Pairing: Heechul/Gunhee
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Heechul has spent his entire life telling fate to go fuck itself
A/N: Raye tries to write one of those "soul mate" AU fics without making it completely cliche. The pacing in this might be horrible and it can't decide on a tone aaaaaaaaaaaaa. Actually this has...not other "pairings" per se but ( Read more... )

heechul/gunhee, fanfiction

Comments 5

anonymous January 5 2016, 19:04:54 UTC

I really like this. If you were going for unchliched soulmate AU you totally nailed it. It was cute and fun, also really easy to read. I love this style - so little words and so much content which I'm really envious of because HOW TO WRITE A SCENE AND TELL EVERYTHING WITHOUT USING NEVERENDING PARAGRAPHS?!?! I LOVE it ( ... )

ri0t_machine January 5 2016, 20:33:23 UTC

Thank you! I actually feel bad about not writing super detailed paragraphs bc its kind of stuck into ppl's heads that lots of detailed paragraphs = good writing, but I'm trying to accept that this is my writing style and it works for me.

tbh the fact that I don't like eunhae and a lot of other people do is what gave me the idea to make eunhyuk and donghae "soul mates" that don't actually end up together lmao. So I mean i would prefer if it didn't take place in the exact universe mine is in but if you want to write a fic with the same idea go ahead! I don't read soul mate fics so I don't know what they are usually like, but if you want to credit me or give a link to this fic I don't mind of course.

anonymous January 5 2016, 22:04:54 UTC

I don't know.. It's fine to have a super detailed story with all those descriptions that make people bleed their hearts out but then.. as a reader, I come back to shorter stories more often because if they are made right it's easier to get my head around them.. Does it make any sense? It's more likely that I want to read a shorter story again from the beginning to the end, because with those super detailed stories I can only get back to few moments that were significant.. Your writing style just works for me ( ... )

ri0t_machine January 5 2016, 23:56:20 UTC

I usually only see the name thing too but that never made sense to me bc that would be SO easy to find out who the person is and that's no fun lmao also what about people with the same name???? so yeah I decided to just go with numbers.

I mean I don't mind if you use the number thing or if you use eunhyuk and donghae's concept just like I wouldn't want anyone to read yours and then read mine and think they did get together in the end bc that's not how mine is ever going to go if that makes sense???

anonymous January 16 2017, 02:07:42 UTC

I love this fic! This was my first Gunheechul fic tbh and I regret nothing. I'm a sucker for the soulmate on skin au and you executed it in a way that was unique and funny and lovely to read. The number idea was !!!! and I love how you write dialogue!!! Will def read everything you've written!!