Ohhh! Please continue! This looks really interesting. I like that we, the reader, have been thrown in the middle of it with Harry. So we are going through it with him. Good job!
ooh I'm veerry intrigued by this set-up! I can't wait for more! Your imagery was well-structured and your Harry voice was well-done too. Also, your Perry dialogue was great - I could tell it was him from the get-go.
Your first KKBB fic? Well, you've started with a bang. The voices are dead on (only Perry would correct your grammar while you sit bleeding next to him), and I'm ready to find out what the heck is going on.
haha I thought the same thing about the grammar correcting - but in my mind I'm thinking it's just his own form of distracting himself from a bullet-ridden, bloody, and amnesiac Harry.
Oh, I've been waiting for an amnesia fic (of the non-romantic comedy-esque variety). I thought about doing one myself (because I'd remember that my sister had a friend who suffered from amnesia and he only vaguely recalled that they were friends because he remembered the way she called him "asshole") but the idea never got too far (Harry not really remembering Perry -- just the way Perry calls him "idiot").
haha, I'm actually surprised that I haven't found any amnesia fics for KKBB (but if I had, I probably wouldn't be writing this one). Thank you for the comment :)
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I thought about doing one myself (because I'd remember that my sister had a friend who suffered from amnesia and he only vaguely recalled that they were friends because he remembered the way she called him "asshole") but the idea never got too far (Harry not really remembering Perry -- just the way Perry calls him "idiot").
Now I don't have to prompt this. ^_^
Anyway, so far, so good!
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