Ch. 23

[riansage]

Sorry for the delay, this was a tough chapter to get out. I think I replied to everyone that reviewed ch. 22. I'm leaving for vacation for a week in the morning (Riviera Maya without the kids! Woohoo!), so ch. 24 will probably take a while as well. That's probably good news for Lossefalme who has been getting swamped with all these little

Comments

[lossefalme]

Hee hee... I really liked chapter 23. :) I thought the subtle character thoughts and actions you threw in really added to the story. About your short fic "The Fountain"... I actually haven't read it. I was a little confused when I got your email because I hadn't been to your ff.net profile since your last chapter. ;) So sorry for confusing you, if I did. I started to read it, but then I stopped because I thought it might spoil me for what will happen later in "Will of the Force". Tee hee. I know that sounds silly, but when I realized it was after the Battle of the Star Forge I thought I should wait to read it. Even though I REALLY want to read it, because just from the first paragraph or two it sounds really emotional/melancholy/angsty. :) All good things. Heh heh

Spoilers for Will of the Force?

[riansage]

I don't think "The Fountain" has spoilers. If anything, it adds a little background to her relationship and feelings on Malak. It's definitely a background piece, but not necessarily a future piece. Does that make sense?