Wicked Games

[riastarstruck]

Wicked Games

Author: RiaStarStruck (me!)
Rating: R
Pairing: Vam
Summary: “He was unlike anyone I'd ever known; he was unapologetically beautiful, with a bitter sense of humour, biting, dark and intelligent... ” it was their relationship, as dark and messed up as it could be. Ville was a creature of violence, and Bam worshipped him for it, for his

Comments

[sadsong666]

Did I get FC??

[sadsong666]

Yay! First comment!

Anyway, the way you wrote this is completely brilliant. The story is absolutely
poetic and beautiful. The story is sick, twisted, and dark. And yet I loved every word, every paragraph. I loved how you painted Ville, as a womanizer of sorts and Bam as his lover, craving the sick relationship that they have.
It's complex and strange. Amazing.

[riastarstruck]

*Hands FC vammie-muffins*
thank you so much! i love that sometimes the sick and twisted can sometimes be poetic and appreciated. It's a whole new look on life, and as fucked up as they are, i think they're quite interesting in this.
i love the idea of ville as this predetor, he possesses the stage and then other times he reverts in on himself, think its fascinating
thanks so much for the comment, its always great to get them

[jenniferadkins3]

love it

[riastarstruck]

thanks! dark and angsty is (for me), most fun to write

[marjohn666valo]

I like the way you write; it reminds me of my own writing style; using lots of angsty imagery, analyzing abstract things in concrete ways, even using 1st person POV...that's my fave POV when it comes to writing :D really good job!

p.s. I wouldn't mind meeting up with Ville in a dirty back street, lol ^^

[riastarstruck]

thanks!
i rarely write in 1st person, i find it limiting, though at times it gives an awsome view on things, it just fit for this one and it was fun to experiement with.
angsty dark and full of obscure ideas is the most fun to write, you can just go nuts!

-wouldnt we all? but sadly this ville would notice this and instead choose the proud virgin on the other side of the bar *sigh* or bam...

[marjohn666valo]

Yes, 1st person is limiting and that's why i like it. it gives a mysterious edge to the overall story, you only get one side of the story and are dying to know about the other side, which makes the level of anticipation (and frustraion) go up :D

Oh i can play a proud virgin! I play the role at home all the time and no one has suspected a thing, lol! but yeah...Bam has more chance with Ville than all of us put together *sighs*

[riastarstruck]

HAHAHA! oh darling you made me crack up!
and i would play it again for a chance with ville!

[satan_sam]

dark ,twisted && sick ;)
I like very much.

[riastarstruck]

lol, just the way i like things