Far Side of the Sun

[riastarstruck]

 Far Side of the Sun -3
Author - Riastarstruck
Rating - R
Warnings - Angst, UST
Summary - The story of the boys dealing with their demons during the making of Screamworks, how they find their way back to each other, and the REAL meaning behind Bam's portrait tattoo of Ville
Disclaimer - I own nothing and no one, sadly. i would be a good god... perhaps a

Comments

[bluespire]

I think I get FC here. :)

[bluespire]

God, the angst is killing me here. You write it so well. I bow down to your talent. The scene with Bam calling drunk...Ville's longing...I loved the way he hung up on Bam and then wouldn't answer again, shaving off his beard instead. I loved how Bam tried a couple more times before giving up. I loved Ville's fascination with Bam the next morning. Bam finally got some of the attention that he had been wanting but he couldn't enjoy it, tragic.

And their confrontation. OMG! You could not have done it better. It was so volatile yet tender, so full of unresolved feeling. I loved how it started and they both pushed it along against their wills, realizing it on the edges of their awareness, terrified but unable to resist until Bam finally broke. I love how Ville didn't want him to conitnue but gave in, settled into it and just took care of him.

Man oh man, this is like crack for me. I just read three chapters in a row and now I have to wait! Damn! Pity me. :)

Okay, loving this and awaiting chapter 4. :)

[riastarstruck]

thank you again! this is one of my favorite chapters, it just has so much raw emotion, and such a turning point in the story too.
their fight was the scene which started this whole story so glad it worked out well!

and what can i say? i love writing angst, i find it so rewarding.
your the second person who has become addicted to one of my stories lol! thats fun!
well you'll get more soon, i hope it lives up to your hopes!
thanks again for the smile making comments

[bluespire]

"this is one of my favorite chapters,"

So, am I to take this to mean that you have more written? Because I gotta tell you, I am so up-to-here with WIPs that don't get updated...not to mention finished. Not saying I'm not gonna read whatever you post because you were dead on... I'm addicted! *slaps inside of elbow* But I am always hopeful that folks write (for the most part) before they post. Just curious. :)

And yeah, I think any good fic has to have angst, there has to be struggle, uncertainty, conflict that is resolved. That's the whole point, IMO. You are clearly very good at all that. :)

[eisfor_eek]

This is beautiful. It's amazing, really. You truly have a talent for capturing the mood of not only the surroundings, but the characters. This really makes my heart hurt, in a good way.

Thank you for sharing this with the world. I look forward for to the rest.

[riastarstruck]

thank you so much! i think mood is so important to a story, i just wish i could capture it in my art too.

more soon!

[shamone666]

I'm really enjoying this :)

The depth of Ville's emotions makes this seem very real. I am wondering though if later on you go into anymore of the background of the boys, why they are so broken down? If not I'm sure I'll love it anyway, your writings fabulous :)

Looking forward to more!

[riastarstruck]

good!
i go into a bit of whats breaking them, not a huge amount though, no flashbacks or anything. This story sort of relies a lot of assumed knowledge, i see it as we're just getting a snapshot of their real lives, we don't see anything from before and we don't see anything from after, its that single moment in time that we are witness too.
and because i'm basing on and inspired by actual events i don't really want to go all out and change the very backgrounds of the boys, and maybe because and how little i actually know about their real lives i'm hesitant to add and remove at will, we're always learning more.

wow lol, have an essay!
more soon, hope you continue liking

[shamone666]

That makes perfect sense, I adore realistic fics and to be able to retain that I think its better not to fabricate to much to the point where its unbelievable.

So once more this is great! And I'm sure I will continuce liking ;)

[maxxipad321]

I just read all three chapters, and im very intrigued. your style of writing is amazing, very descriptive and emotional. i can't wait to see where this goes.