Far Side of the Sun

[riastarstruck]

 Far Side of the Sun
Chapter Four
Author: RiaStarStruck
Rating: R
Disclaimer: I own nothing and no one.
Summary: Ville was hiding within the safe confines of a hotel room he wasn’t paying for and his world was consumed by the album. Bam was trying to find the friendship they used to have, that spark that was so absent from their friendship now.
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[bluespire]

Just when I thought it was safe to go to bed... *runs off to read*

[bluespire]

Brilliant as usual. I'm so tired. I'll comment properly after some sleep. But I really liked it...I'll tell you all about it in a bit. :)

[bluespire]

It’s a little more difficult to effortlessly slip away into work and friends when he'd bared his soul to Ville three days ago, laid out every insecurity and fear for Ville to poke at. He didn’t know if he could ever face him again, knowing that he knew, didn’t just suspect, didn’t have an inkling but he knew, without a shadow of a doubt how utterly fucked up Bam really was. I love this. I love that Ville grounds Bam, that Bam's emotional connection to Ville and the fact that he admitted it, spoke it aloud, grounded him, even if only a little. Beautiful.

“God you beautiful.” Bam breathed, his voice broke the peace and Bam felt his eyes widen in shock to mirror Ville’s, what was he doing saying shit like that? He never said things like that to his wife and now here he was saying it to one of his best friends? He held his breath waiting for whatever flippant remark Ville would use to dispel this situation. Instead Ville ducked his head, attempting to hide behind his now shorter locks, in the pale blue light Bam watched as a blush

[riastarstruck]

i have to admite, i love the idea of Ville stripping... even innocently, and especially while blushing because of Bam.
Add that to a pool late at night i like it even more. pools at night have a certain magical feel to them, at least for me, dreamlike if you will.

i like the idea that this comes off as "languid and rich" that makes me think of hot baths and sultry late nights in summer.
i like to think of this as them, getting comfortable with each other again, finding themselves amidst the chaos of their issues.
more soon!

[sadsong666]

This made me cry even though it wasn't as sad as the last chapter. I wanted to cry when Bam called Ville Lazarus, when he hadn't in a long time. It was almost like a sign that they were becoming close again. I liked the way Bam was still interested in Ville's music. How he snooped at his doodles and scribbles, wanting info on the album.. It was just SO Bam. I also love the little rebellious streak you gave Ville with the scissors and the hair. And the way you spoke of how Ville craves the raw energy of violence and how he thinks "you were never more human than when you fucked and when you fought." I really like this part because I see that in myself. Sometimes, I crave a fight or a fuck, to feel more alive, to feel more human. I want to hit something or someone. To yell and scream. Do something reckless

[riastarstruck]

wow i love your comment! definitely don't apologize for leaving such a long comment

[shamone666]

Once again a great chapter!

The way they are distant yet close at the same time is really intriguing it shows a deep connection, which of course I love.

I also loved the little reminiscing section, very cute :)

[riastarstruck]

lol, yeah i quite like the reminiscing section, its good to look back on good times.

thanks for the comment, much appreciated
more soon!

[lvr_girl616]

Fuckin adore this story ♥

I cannot wait for more and to have you put me on another emotional roller coaster =]

[mildly_neurotic]

So I just read all four chapters on Bluespire's rec. Your writing is gorgeous. It's deep and poetic and a joy to read. Mind you I sobbed through large portions of it. Very well told.