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riastarstruck

Far Side of the Sun - NOW COMPLETE

Jan 15, 2011 17:25

Far Side of the Sun
Chapter Seven -FINAL!
Author: RiaStarStruck
Rating: R
Pairing: VAM
Disclaimer: I own nothing and no one ...except my slave, say hello slave.
Summary: Ville was hiding within the safe confines of a hotel room wasn’t paying for and his world was consumed by the album. Bam was trying to find the friendship they used to have, that spark ( Read more... )

far side of the sun, slash, [fic], vam

Comments 11

kultaseni427 January 16 2011, 06:20:15 UTC

Super ironic.
Listening to Heartkiller right this moment ^.^

Anyway,
I just sat and read the entire set, and I LOVE your style of writing. It's more than
this happened, and he was mad.
It let's me see into their minds, which is AMAZING.
Gah, why did it have to end?

kultaseni427 January 16 2011, 06:20:31 UTC

SN;;

FC!!!!!!!

riastarstruck January 16 2011, 09:41:12 UTC

i'm glad that comes across, i like to think about why they act the way they do in my stories, they are both so screwed up it makes for an interesting read :P

i'm so glad you like it, i love hearing it from people.

and thats fantastic! the best song to be listening too when reading it!!

shamone666 January 16 2011, 06:44:48 UTC

Ohhh I'm sad this story is over, I have really enjoyed it.

I like that the ending is somewhat bittersweet because we all know that life doesn't necessarily gives us what we want, but it was still hopeful and I love that. I also loved their first sober kiss it was beautiful. Nervous Bam is one of my favourite types of Bam!

Great stuff :)

riastarstruck January 16 2011, 09:39:09 UTC

i rather love a bit of nervous Bam, especially when it comes to kissing Ville.

thanks for reading, i'm so glad you liked it!

bluespire January 16 2011, 20:02:53 UTC

He realised that this was what his life was missing, not the dark corners of a pub, not the sticky tang of liquor in the back of his throat and the sway and blur of a drunken mind, or even the mad fumbling of two idiots too inebriated to do anything more than touch and kiss. It was this laughter and human contact which he was doing without, from which he had locked himself away, the overwhelming press of human forms. It was the smear of colour, stupidly vivid against the dark they all cherished, something so basically human, about which he didn't know the first thing. For all his pretty words and deep insights into the workings of a heart, he didn't understand some of the most basic, simple human things. It had always been so much easier to use alcohol to fill in the blanks. You know I love this, both the sentiment and the way you wrote it. It's expressed so beautifully ( ... )

riastarstruck January 18 2011, 03:22:23 UTC

thank you!!! i'm beyond happy you like this.

that kiss was pretty much what the whole story was leading up to, i'm glad it worked out, that whole scene hung in my mind for ages i wondered if i could ever actually get it down.

as for the angst about Jussi, i remember so clearly during the time of Bams ville tattoo that Jussi was such a huge part of bams life, he was his new drinking buddy and i wondered how ville would feel, lol that was the true inspiration for this story, thats how it all began!

thank you so much for Betaing this for me, you helped me make this something i am proud of.

bluespire January 18 2011, 03:35:36 UTC

You know, this was an amazing story before I ever got involved. Thank you for letting me have a small part in it. I really enjoyed beta-ing those last couple of chapters and would love to be of service for stuff you write in the future. If you feel you could use the help, just hit me. :) You know where to find me.

villegirl17 January 17 2011, 19:50:28 UTC

I'm sad its gone and over but I liked how it ended.

tattooedwoman July 16 2011, 17:18:57 UTC

During my many spaced out and continued absences I've missed this story! But I'm a total lurker by nature and I have certain people who are excellent writers that I tend to...er...lurk around in hopes of finding a good story.

You're one of the main 3 that I (with lack of better term lol) stalk and, woman, I just found gold!

The realism of the situation at hand, their emotions---so well put, this story is so believable. Ugh, you're amazing, as always.

O.o I'll be seeing you....

(Okay I promise I'm a (not a) weirdo lol)

riastarstruck July 19 2011, 04:32:59 UTC

well better late finding it than never.
i'm so glad you like it, and i love that you stalk me!

...that sounded weird, but you know what i mean right?