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[ricekrispie]

So I finished my story yesterday before I left work. I'm not going to post anything for a few days, I need to back off from it for a bit before I go in for editing - and I KNOW the final parts need work. First pass is basically just getting everything out on paper - I'd already done that. First draft is slightly more coherent and conveys all the

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[mercuryhime]

okay, so i read your wall of text. I rather agree with you. I do like inuyasha because it's cute and funny, but you're right about the characters. something always frustrated me about them and I wasn't sure what. Now I think i know why. you rule. the characters you love and respect the most usually suffer and grow in a some way. Which is why everyone loves Wilbur in Charlotte's Web. Even kids' books need characters that grow. Those are the stories you remember.

Thanks for mentioning Gundam Wing, by the waaay. I remember how i used to love it.