isn't it coold for a walk?? the doggie fights to stay in when we want to walk him. and when we get him out, he fights to get back in instead of peeing, so I end up cleaning the kitchen floor a lot these days. bleh
how much do you love chocolate? and what kind?
If it helps any, I don't feel that it's necessary to describe people in the beginning. You can disperse little details throughout the story. it's like developing appearance with character. although, depending on story, you might need to describe them early on. I still haven't read your revision. I'm sorry. The only reason I'm even up right now is because the dog annoyed me until I got up and filled his water bowl. and on the way to filling his water, I found 5 different puddles of pee that I had to clean up. I'm tired. how do people work and school at the same tiiiime??
I don't really get cold easily. My hands do, I war gloves when it's like... +5 (celsius). But other than that cold doesn't bug me too much.
I told you, read it when you get around to it, I'm not in any sort of a hurry :). I'm concentrated more on my next one now. And that's how I'm approaching it in this time. I made it into a kind of exercise for myself. I have to introduce 4 characters at the same time, one at a time. So I'm doing a brief bit on what they look like, then a protagonist aside describing their personality-at-a-glance, and then throughout the story I'll do things to back that impression up, develop it more, or change it in some way. It's a lot of work and hard thinking but I'm enjoying it.
I'm not actually a huge chocolate fan. Milk chocolate I suppose. I love those fruit flavored ones you can get in the big tins :).
*cue birthday song* Merry Christmas to yooooooooou, Merry Christmas to yooooooooou, Meery Christmas to Ref-fy, Merry Christmas to yooooooooou!
I know it's not here yet, but I felt like singing anyway.
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how much do you love chocolate? and what kind?
If it helps any, I don't feel that it's necessary to describe people in the beginning. You can disperse little details throughout the story. it's like developing appearance with character. although, depending on story, you might need to describe them early on.
I still haven't read your revision. I'm sorry. The only reason I'm even up right now is because the dog annoyed me until I got up and filled his water bowl. and on the way to filling his water, I found 5 different puddles of pee that I had to clean up. I'm tired. how do people work and school at the same tiiiime??
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I told you, read it when you get around to it, I'm not in any sort of a hurry :). I'm concentrated more on my next one now. And that's how I'm approaching it in this time. I made it into a kind of exercise for myself. I have to introduce 4 characters at the same time, one at a time. So I'm doing a brief bit on what they look like, then a protagonist aside describing their personality-at-a-glance, and then throughout the story I'll do things to back that impression up, develop it more, or change it in some way. It's a lot of work and hard thinking but I'm enjoying it.
I'm not actually a huge chocolate fan. Milk chocolate I suppose. I love those fruit flavored ones you can get in the big tins :).
*cue birthday song*
Merry Christmas to yooooooooou,
Merry Christmas to yooooooooou,
Meery Christmas to Ref-fy,
Merry Christmas to yooooooooou!
I know it's not here yet, but I felt like singing anyway.
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