Tiny Spider

Apr 02, 2004 09:05

Tiny SpiderHe paces along, step by step ( Read more... )

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pasperou April 1 2004, 19:58:52 UTC
Lol, i think we guessed that.
Nice. Inquisition is part of the soul of poetry.
Taking a look from another angle... nice stuff
I like the way you have used comparisons of large and small by changing from his and your perspectives.
nice

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zefr April 1 2004, 20:04:51 UTC
I am going to agree to all Phil's "nice"'s and say Nice!

And I have a fair idea that this poem isnt just about a certain little spider scurrying around last night?.... In fact I think I have a fair idea of what you are trying to say!

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chapmieao April 1 2004, 20:26:10 UTC
YEh go comando tiny spider

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