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don't bother reading if you aren't gonna comment, even if it's negative..I don't mind. All I have now are some poems I've written, pretty much all a while ago. I want to write another one or two before the deadline, but we'll see how that goes. I also want to take some pictures to submit (as well as for a possible scholarship from a photography club), but I'll just worry about these for now. I might submit one, I might submit all of them...but I'm submitting at least something. Give me some comments or criticism or something, whatever it is.
untitled 1
choking on thoughts i used to mean
i have never felt so unclean
i've lost all my heart can take
i wont be who i used to be
so used and so broken
i'll take this as a token
of the appreciation you never had
you treated me so bad
untitled 2
the messages you send
when you're dumped by a friend
you look in a mirror
and watch yourself bend
for your own dignity you have to fend
realizing the depths you will descend
swirling and swirling
the spiral of no end
reaching for someone
whom you can depend
hoping this friendship
is one you can mend
you still wait
no longer wanting to pretend
untitled 3
we've walked our ways divided
too bad this love was one sided
but we still remained side by side
in someone elses arms
with feelings i'm forced to hide
cut
a clean incision
with such precision
you'd swear he did this before
another life
taken by knife
he'll be gone forever more
progression
your emotions...
so frail
his persistence
will prevail
you let him take your heart
you just put it up for sale
dont open up so easily
he'll take you down
and make you queasy
sick to your stomach
and sick to your head
he'll give you that feeling
that you're already dead
you've felt it before
and you feel it again
he asks for your heart
and you still let him in
he wants you back
you don't want him at all
but you still listen
and set yourself up for the fall