I like this. You work well when you're bored, apparently. It doesn't give away too much, and that leaves it to the reader to assume what exactly happened. You also managed to keep Draco canon. Abused/Raped/Hurtinanyway!Draco is almost never in character. Yay you!
I can never get over your writing. The way you phrase things and the words you use do exactly what they're supposed to do and it's just so good. I so wish I could write like you.
I'm taking the fact that you like my Draco as the highest of compliments. I'd do the happy dance around the room but I fear it would traumatize the furniture.
Haha. Yes... I am quite picky about Draco, aren't I? Oh jeez... what if I'm super-picky about Draco and my Draco is never in character? That would be the worst. Hmm... maybe I'll just stick to being picky about Theo...
You know what I like about your writing? It's elegant. You take your characters seriously, and respect them like this is something more than just fanfiction. And that's very refreshing to see because with the way you write, you're able to reinvent these boys, while keeping the characteristics that make them them. By the end of each of your pieces, the characters are yours.
Liz, this is very good, and the second to last paragraph had me holding my breath. (And I don't want you to think I'm saying any of this out of obligation, because I'm not.)
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I can never get over your writing. The way you phrase things and the words you use do exactly what they're supposed to do and it's just so good. I so wish I could write like you.
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I'm taking the fact that you like my Draco as the highest of compliments. I'd do the happy dance around the room but I fear it would traumatize the furniture.
*HUGS!*
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*licks Theo*
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I love how Harry must fix him once he learns he's being just like Lucius. Most excellent.
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Thanks!
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this was torturously beautiful, mah dear.
ack. push those boys together.
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Thankie sweety.
*nudges*
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Do you ever want me to beta for you again? It would be an honour. :)
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I hope all is good with you. Love you, miss you.
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Liz, this is very good, and the second to last paragraph had me holding my breath. (And I don't want you to think I'm saying any of this out of obligation, because I'm not.)
You know I love you, right? ♥♥♥
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I love you too (although I have no idea how to make the little heart things)!
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