Comments | rierie555: "Tyed" Up In Harper's Tales

rierie555

"Tyed" Up In Harper's Tales

Dec 22, 2003 22:16

A young girl in the back of the crowd glances around the Third Circle of Hell, not half interested in The Guide's explanation of their surroundings, though her ears perk up a bit when he mentions a club. Someone standing beside her begins to cough and hack in the girl's direction, not bothering to cover his or her diseased mouth. The girl turns ( Read more... )

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lsucurlyq December 23 2003, 16:57:33 UTC

Rie Rie!
I put you on my friends list, feel free to do the same
<3, Erin

Sure! rierie555 December 23 2003, 17:56:07 UTC

I'd love to add you to my friends list! K guys, I got the background working, what do you think? Haha thanks, Ang, for helpin me get it up there.

wow anonymous December 23 2003, 18:40:24 UTC

thats a great story rie..very interesting..were you just a tad bored today?
i lurve you
shelbs

MEESH! rierie555 December 23 2003, 18:49:54 UTC

Yup and inspired to be a lil creative!.. I haven't written creatively just for the heck of it in a while. OMG, Meesh, I'm so obsessed with this journal thing, we need to go somewhere SOON haha.

anonymous December 26 2003, 22:20:47 UTC

ok ok ok, I've been heavily criticized for not writing anything in my own journal. However, I find it necessary to allow anmari to continue with her…er….interesting entries uninterrupted. So, I've decided to comment on yours (is that good enough anmari??) loonnng comments, not little petty ones nono. Long irritating comments! So miss rie, this entry was quite, fascinating? Yes, what was the purpose? nice pun btw, did you think of that yourself? I'm oh so proud, you'll be another joker, you will. I must say, (not TRYING to be rude of course) I couldn't finish reading this entry, because I must say…..i have no earthly idea of what it is supposed to be….i say, explanation please?? ~jenn

M'dear Jenn! rierie555 December 26 2003, 23:14:25 UTC

So glad you asked! It's a spinoff of sorts from Mr. Harper's fantastic... and slightly disturbing.. stories involving a crowd of unfortunate people who are lead through a series of nasty places by The Guide, an offbeat character if ever there was one. My female character is a member of The Guide's audience. Get it? Got it? Good!

dear dear anonymous December 27 2003, 01:51:34 UTC

well your story was none other than interesting itself. i do think you shall become another famous writer...not quite so good as mr poe, but still rather good. when you DO become famous, put me in one of your stories...kinda like that whole female indiana jones character we made up. nice. and you can be my little sidekick that always comes up with stupid puns...sorta like robin for batman...dear...i must sleep now...until next time..~jenn

mugatu224 December 27 2003, 06:37:36 UTC

::nodds:: commendable, although there are some small faults, lol the limo didn't come until after we left Hell and slept in a motel six (remember u commented about my treatment of the owner) so the limo was never driving in Hell, secondly, clothes eating cats?! that sounds more like a bad porn than anything lol >

Oops.. haha! rierie555 December 27 2003, 07:05:43 UTC

Okay, so I left out a few itsy bitsy details.. and the cats were a lil bit random, but I had fun writing it! And that's what counts! I think you are the only one, Tyler, to even think of porn when you read it.. right, guys? Um.. I hope I'm right, hah! I wouldn't wanna be advocating porn on my site.. hmm...

Re: Oops.. haha! mugatu224 December 27 2003, 07:11:21 UTC

::cough cough:: i do recall the cats going to eat the Abecrombie low cut jeans or whatever, and the t shirt... its my guess that the characther doesn't wear more than one pair of pants so that would leave one to beleive that the person would be half-naked, lool scraping on the edge of pornography im afraid

Wrong you are! rierie555 December 27 2003, 07:27:26 UTC

The cat never actually ate the jeans, it only attempted to. She kicked it into the lava pit before it could pull them off lol.