Comments | riflethrough: fic: mixed with bad advice

riflethrough

fic: mixed with bad advice

Sep 09, 2009 09:44

So, uh. This happened.

Mixed with Bad Advice
Wizards of Waverly Place. Alex/Justin. 1,528 words.
Warnings: incest, underage
Notes: Thanks so much to pirateygoodness for the beta help! Set after the WOWP movie.

( The competition to keep their magic had always seemed like this far off thing, something that was going to happen, but not to her, maybe, and now it’s all she can think about these days. )

wizards of waverly place, fic

Comments 26

irishmizzy September 11 2009, 15:46:36 UTC

Oh man, this is so so great. I really enjoyed it.

riflethrough September 12 2009, 13:46:22 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed! :)

openmydoors September 11 2009, 21:03:21 UTC

This was so pretty, and just the kind of coda to the movie we needed. I love your Alex, and the way she sneaks into Justin's room, and the kiss at the end was perfect, like the rest of the fic. Fantastic job!!

riflethrough September 12 2009, 13:47:15 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked all those things.

ladililn September 11 2009, 22:10:38 UTC

Aww, I love it! I'm definitely with you there where I can imagine that it'd be pretty weird after the competition--so I think you dealt with it beautifully. ♥ I loved the short little sections, and how they all sort of added up at the end, which was, by the way, perfect. :)

riflethrough September 12 2009, 13:48:53 UTC

Yes! Plus, just the idea of the wizard competition seems like something that could put serious strain on a family, or at least the siblings. Anyway, thanks for reading! I'm glad you liked it.

blumvale September 11 2009, 22:45:51 UTC

love it!

riflethrough September 12 2009, 13:47:45 UTC

I'm glad!

morlockiness September 12 2009, 00:37:27 UTC

This is so beautiful and perfect. Amazing job.

riflethrough September 12 2009, 13:49:21 UTC

Thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it.