Transitional States II, Ch36

Nov 04, 2009 11:45

Author's Note: Rated M for language, sexual situations, violence, and the occasional flying monkey man.

Jethro

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transitional states, fanfiction, tiva, tony/ziva, ncis

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fredsmith518 November 4 2009, 19:53:57 UTC
He could only imagine how they must look to others, almost circling one another like rival wolves looking for a weakness I like this and the way you protray their identical reactions, re intake of breath etc

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chiroho November 4 2009, 21:25:18 UTC
Great job showing the tension inherent with sitting on the sidelines, waiting for something to happen, particularly when it's related to people that you care for a lot.

Nice scene playing off Director David against Gibbs. There definitely would be a pretty significant lack of trust there, going all the way back to Ari. But then I do like the soul baring that David does outside the command center. I can see that happening because there just isn't anyone else he can open up to - certainly nobody in Mossad. And Gibbs has a relationship with his daughter which Eli David hasn't had in years, which in some ways make that heart to heart easier.

And I liked the way you referenced in Shepard being killed. And you're right, that scene in Judgement Day was definitely very well done and would have been hard to top.

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